Writing Techa Futara: The Silent Beyond [M-VLS]

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[CENTER][COLOR=Blue]August 5th, 2585[/COLOR]

[COLOR=DimGray] A war was started during such date. The Dalth Republic faced off with the country of Futara. The republic's meeting with the other nations of our world was a place where all contries were at peace with each other. Except Futara. Believing that the world would be best as one country started many political battles.

1 month after those battles Futara decided to stop their shananigens. They decided to break off of the ties with other nations. Still the Dalth Republic wanted to show Futara that spliting would cost them. The Dalthan army shot 50 missles at the Futaran border.

Thus a war started. Five years of sensles violence was brought to an end by the Futaran's deciding to name themselves not a state but a teritory. Their laws stayed the same but they were no longer a country. [/COLOR]

[COLOR=DimGray]An underground organization within the Dalthan country. The D.A.F resistance was formed. This group of roughly 30 million people attacked Futara, and started another war. Soon the whole republic attacked Futara again. For 10 years the war has torn us into five different conroled 'states'. This is the story of a hero that rose from the ashes of defeat to stop a war dividing 2 nations.[/COLOR][/CENTER]

[CENTER][FONT=Trebuchet MS]TeChA FuTaRa[/FONT]: [COLOR=Blue][FONT=Impact]The Silent Beyond [/FONT] [/COLOR] [/CENTER]

[B]Chapter 1:[/B] [COLOR=Blue]Sidewind 1/|\1 dniwediS[/COLOR]

[COLOR=DimGray]A baron wasteland. Humanity is just like this place. Nothing but dust and sand, in the midst of a stupid conflict. But every once and a while a person is born who can change the world. 1 man can make a difference. No matter what he's told. believe what they may but he is the next savior, to a much bigger conflict. This is that man's story. A meer 18 year old graduate who's a genious in technology. [/COLOR]

[COLOR=DimGray]18 year old Baan Rawvenson was on a mission to check on the enimies advancement into the Futarian territory.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=Blue]"I see, so D.A.F is planning on attacking us with airplanes. We might need air mechs for this." [/COLOR] [COLOR=DimGray]Baan said over the intercom.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=Blue]"But they only have one mech suit. The stingray XX485, A weak mech suit. Something big is unfolding."[/COLOR] [COLOR=DimGray]Sidewind 2 sighed in his hand. [/COLOR] [COLOR=Blue]"So Sidewind 1, ur.. Baan. Why aren't you going to college?"[/COLOR]

[COLOR=Blue]"I hate the experience. Why? How old are you anyways?"[/COLOR] [COLOR=DimGray]Baan asked.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=Blue]"I just thought you had a reason for it, so I asked. And by the way I'm 24."[/COLOR]

[COLOR=Blue]'Sidewind team head back to base. Your mission is complete.' [/COLOR] [COLOR=DimGray]The voice was the Colonel.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=DimGray]On there way back they cought a glimse of another enemy mech that was about 6 miles from the others. Baan's eyes glared in a most horrified manner.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=Blue]"Th...that's the One-wing! Model 1W-Y675,the most latest of commanding mechs. Their Colonel coming towards the base!"[/COLOR]

[COLOR=Blue]"Don't worry SW, we can take care of it. Wre just need some blades. Sidewind 3, and 4 are also heavy hitters. So we can take them down, easily." [/COLOR] [COLOR=DimGray]SW2 was more boasty than usual.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=DimGray]When they returned to the base the other 2 members came up to them. Sidewind 3, Jenoa. And Sidewind 4, Vincent.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=Blue]"Well our mighty heroes return." [/COLOR] [COLOR=DimGray]Jenoa laughed in a hateful manner. Baan gave him a look.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=Blue]"We don't have time. We have to get equiped with blades, guns, anything!! Their Colonel, Kadan is headed towards us. We have to mobilize quickly."[/COLOR] [COLOR=DimGray]Baan spoke with disdain his his words. Kadan isn't just the colonel, but he killed Daan's father, Ruthefar.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=Blue]"Okay we'll believe you for now. Unless the base gets attacked I don't think we should do anything." [/COLOR] [COLOR=DimGray]Jenoa's attitude got him into a lot of fights. Baan's eyes showed anger.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=DimGray]In a fit of rage Baan punched Jenoa in the stomach.[/COLOR] [COLOR=Blue]"shut up and just get ready. We can't just fuck around, we need to get ready!"'[/COLOR]

[COLOR=DimGray]Vincent grabbed Baan and pushed him to the floor.[/COLOR][COLOR=Blue] "Maybe we should just listen." [/COLOR] [COLOR=DimGray]He started to speak up.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=Blue]"So Jenoa, shut you damn mouth and get in gear. Even if he's lying we can't just sit here." [/COLOR] [COLOR=DimGray]Vincent ran off, and in a fury Jenoa stormed off along.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=Blue]"Sorry I didn't help you Baan. It would just cause a big fight." Sidwind 2 or rather Zeke, turned around. "If it's like last time though you could get in trouble. I was right there yes. But.. it could of been a diversion."[/COLOR]

[COLOR=DimGray]Baan rubbed his face. [/COLOR] [COLOR=Blue]"Go I'll meet up with you." [/COLOR] [COLOR=DimGray]Zeke shook his head and walked away.[/COLOR]
[I][COLOR=Blue]Damn. Again they think I'm lying. If it was a diversion. Then I'm going to get punished like before.[/COLOR][/I] [COLOR=DimGray]Baan thought as he arose. He too walked off.[/COLOR]

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[COLOR=Blue]So what do you thing so far? Any critisism is fine. If you think there's something I should get fixed tell me as well.[/COLOR]