PWNED Posted February 5, 2007 Share Posted February 5, 2007 TURNING IT AROUND~ A Comedy on Good Intentions "Look at this performance chart" The manager said to the motley crew of workers "September we were in the red, October in the red, November through to January were all completely red. We haven't turned a profit in months and somehow are spending more money in bills then we are actually making." The group muttered quietly; giving various excuses for the performance of the store, a small clothing store in, or placing the blame on the others. "I've made a new order for some half-decent mannequins this time and our supply is sending a smaller order to us month" He continued "And we have two months to turn things around otherwise you guys need to find new jobs. Are we clear?" Once more, there was a general murmur of agreement plus one blaming the foreign guy although that one was ignored by the others. The New York world may not be rocked by the quality or quantity of their supplies but they will damn will appreciate it and buy their stuff by any means nessicary. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Character Creation aka Becoming the Loser ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Name: Age: Position in Store: (I'll only let one person be owner so it'll be the person that I consider best suited. Other jobs would be sail assistants, people who work the racks and advertisers) Gender: Nationality: Appearance: Written description or picture please Bio: How your guy came to work for the store and their background, Doesn't need to be too complicated. Personality: OOC: You may look at the RPG and think 'This ain't gonna be funny' but I assure you. The way I plan on taking it will be quite humourus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sandy Posted February 5, 2007 Share Posted February 5, 2007 [color=DarkGreen][B]PWNED[/B], I'm still not sure whether I should've give this a chance, but this game is quite poor in quality. I want you to put more effort to the text itself (punctuation, paragraphs etc.) as well as the contents (seriously, where's the story?). Feel free to post it again when you've improved the concept. - Sandy [B]*thread closed*[/B][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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