Lord Of Terror Posted February 19, 2007 Share Posted February 19, 2007 This is far from an original storyline..however I belive this will be great fun to act in a RPG like this. [COLOR=DimGray]"try to catch my as you may, and elusive as I'll be, you'll search upon a Bay, and look upon the Redwood tree" Sergent Mcoy read aloud at the scene. "Damnit what does this mean?" he shouted as he was turning the evidence around in his hand. The suspect had left a poem on the back of a [URL=http://img219.imageshack.us/my.php?image=californianorth90tg0.jpg ][COLOR=DarkRed]map[/COLOR][/URL] of the area. It had been 3 days since he had any sleep,these ongoing investigations left him effortlessly on edge. This was the fifth crimescene that he had to come to this month, all by the notorious Panther. Bruitle crime scenes flashed through his mind as he tried to figure out how to catch and stop this mass murderer. For all he knew this guy enjoyed killing, and was good at it. In the past year there had been countless unsolved murder cases which had no leads. On this case nineteen teenagers where ruthlessly killed with what the experts belived to be a "high powered" nail gun. They belive it to be "high powered" because most nail guns could shoot point blank through two human skulls, much less at a distance of ten feet. The corpses of the teenagers where strewn around in no particular pattern, but there was one who was at least three feet away from the others. The sergent walked over to examine thim closer, he looked about thirteen. "****" he cursed under his breath as he saw the body, he had a nail lodged in his torso and another in his throat, it appeared he was alive when the "panther" left. He had crawled less than four feet befour drowning in his blood.Sergent Mcoy called an officer over to come and take the map to to the lab for fingerprints, it was a longshot but any little detail would help. He shuddered as the door blew open and the wind picked up the stench of the newly dead, the smell clung to the back of his throat making him gasp for freash air. He burs out the open door and took in deep lungfulls of air trying to rid his mouth of the foul tast, but even the memory of it almost made him gag. He glanced up only to see something move, He drew his Sidearm only to find it was his shadow. Whats wrong with me, i'm jumping at my shadow?, has that maniac scared me me enough to fear for my life? he thought his heart pounding. "Ecsuse me Sir." he turned around gun raised "Sorry to disturb you Sir." a cadet sayed eyes widened with fear. He lowered his weapon "but the crime scene is worn out and we where wondering if we could go home, Sir." he quickly finished. "Tell them I said they can go home" he told him with relif, the cadet started away to tll the others, "oh and cadet" the cadet turned around with a look of curriosity "Yes Sir?" he asked puzzled. "Try not to sneak up on me again, I might not hesitate and shoot you in the head" he said making the last part clear. "Yes Sir" the cadet shouted and ran off to inform the others of the realease of asignment. When Mcoy got back to the office there where only a handfull of people there, he went to his office and made several calles. He needed help on this so he was getting all the help he could get![/COLOR] ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sign-ups You have been called to come in and aid Segent Mcoy in finding and capturing The "Panther" Age : 25-40 *Note: we dont need any retired 75 year old cops hence the age restriction, experionce is good but we want to have field agents, shap minds, ext.* Apperence : Picture is prefered but if you cannot live without a writin dicription it does not bother me in the least. *note: your character does not have to be in uniform* Title : This means: State trooper, FBI, SIU (Special Investigations Unit), IDSI (International Department of Special Investigations) *Note: I need 1 of each befor we can start the RPG but I also need a minimum of 5 people* Bio: How your life as a cop has been, how you moved up as a cop, ect. *NOTE: I DO [B]NOT[/B] WANT ANYTHING ABOUT HOW YOU CAME TO BE A COP ON HERE! MY REASONING WILL BE EXPLAINED AFTER I HAVE CHOSEN MY PLAYERS! FAILURE TO FOLLOW THIS WILL RESULT IN [B]COMPLETE DISREGAURD [/B] TO YOUR SIGN-UP!* *Extra note: In this sign-up I will be judging in "Quality over Quantity" meaning A fifteen paragraph sign-up will not impress me if it isn't thought about and writen well* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sandy Posted February 19, 2007 Share Posted February 19, 2007 [color=DarkGreen]Greetings, [B]Lord of Terror[/B]! Unfortunately your RPG doesn't meet the requirements set in the [url=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=44318]Adventure Square Basics[/url]. It lacks a [B]rating[/B], and you should really focus on the [B]grammar[/B] as well. Also, writing in all-caps is considered impolite here, so why don't you figure out another method to get your point across, okay? Feel free to repost your thread once it meets the requirements. Thank you! - Sandy [B] *thread closed*[/B][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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