Writing Never Dig the Darkness Out (nightmare remix) [PG-V]

[Aberinkula]

[COLOR=Blue]I made a song recently called Never Dig the Darkness Out. My friends like it, but it wasn't the best. So here is the newer version.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=Blue][B]Here's the link tot he old version[/B] [/COLOR] [URL=http://otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=56634][color=blue] Never Dig thh Darkness Out (Original)[/color][/URL]

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[CENTER][U][B][COLOR=blue][FONT=Felix titling]Never Dig the Darkness Out (Nightmare remix)[/FONT][/COLOR][/B][/U]

[COLOR=DimGray]Chained to the lies, as the nightmare begins.
Broken, shattered, scattered?are my sins.
I may be recovering my mind,
But memories of you are left behind.

[B]Never dig the darkness out.
Never dig the nightmare out.
Never dig the darkness out
Never dig the nightmare out.[/B]

Chaos takes away the happiness, as I start to digress.
Torn to the grain, as I?m inflicted with false pain.
With those dreams and delusions inside,
I?m having nightmares, that won?t subside.

[B]Never dig the darkness out.
Never dig the nightmare out.
Never dig the darkness out
Never dig the nightmare out.[/B]

I?m feeling more hopes, a promise of light,
As my bed of spikes gets even more tight.
As I drag my blood drenched soul into bad dreams.
My little dark grave gets bigger it seems.

Chained to the lies like a dog to a tree,
I feel all the pain from you to me.
The yard where I lay I keep trying to pray.
But it might not help, or it just may.

[B]Never dig the darkness out.
Never dig the nightmare out.
Never dig the darkness out
Never dig the nightmare out.[/B]

Trying to dig, out this premise of darkness,
Stuck in my world, it?s pushing the stress.
In this false field of horrible dreams,
Caught in the fire of my grave?s schemes.


I can feel my body rot in the hell of it all.
I attack the beast of my dreams, which will make you fall..
I grip the sword of scattered fate,
As the darkness lingers within my hate.

[B]Never dig the darkness out.
Never dig the nightmare out.
Never dig the darkness out
Never dig the nightmare out.[/B]

The horrible hell is all in my head,
As I try to put my fears to bed.
I feel chaos start to bleed.
But I feel it?s hate start to breed.

[B]Never dig the darkness out.
Never dig the nightmare out.
Never dig the darkness out
Never dig the nightmare out.[/B]

Chained to the dreams for hours on end.
Broken shattered, scattered I am, and I may not mend.
You once were a part of this undying pain,
Now your dead, you won?t laugh at me again.[/COLOR][/CENTER]

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[COLOR=Blue]Any comments?

And sometimes the song will refer to the person giving him the nightmares. Like it will use chaos, or beast.[/COLOR]