gabrielzero Posted October 15, 2007 Share Posted October 15, 2007 ====== SETTING / STORY ====== It's a hot August summer day in the town of Pleasant Valley. You along with some of your friends have decided to take a trip to a family cabin. You aren't expecting nothing different from the previous summers , it's the same thing pretty much every year. As you are packing your backs for the trip , your mind drifts off to the disturbing nightmares you've had the past few weeks. Disturbing images haunt you late at night , the images go beyond the description of words. Still you are hoping that getting away from you daily activities will get rid of these nightmares....... ======= THE GAME: ======= Welcome to my game. As you may have guessed from the above story, the players in this game will end up falling from the peaceful scenery. What the player once thought was a vacation , turns into a blood bathed massacre. The game will be heavily GMed, meaning that I will send you private messages and try to stick somewhat to a plot line I have written down. Players will still be mostly free to do what they want and take their character in whatever direction they please. ========= Character Sheet ========= Name: Age: Description: Mental Problems: I will use my character as an example: [b]Name:[/b] John Vasquez [b]Age:[/b] 21 [b]Description:[/b] John is 6' tall and weighs 160 lbs. He is thin, but with athletic muscle tone. He has long platinum dark hair that stretches down to his shoulders, and his eyes are an icy blue color. His features are angular and almost feminine and he speaks in a soft, hushed voice. John typically wears blue jeans, white t-shirts, and a denim jacket, as well as a backwards turned leather ball-cap and fingerless black leather gloves. His primary mode of transportation is his motorcycle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sandy Posted October 15, 2007 Share Posted October 15, 2007 [COLOR="Green"]Hey, [B]gabrielzero[/B]! This is a nice effort for an RPG, but it shows that you haven't read our requirements for games that can be found neatly packed in one thread called the [url=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=44317]Adventure Square Basics[/url]. The minimum requirements that you seem to lack are a proper [B]rating[/B] and at least [B]three[/B] decent [B]paragraphs of background story[/B], just so people would know what they were signing into. It isn't asking too much now, is it? ;D When you make these changes you're free to repost the game, but I will have to lock this thread so people won't sign up to it in vain. Cheers! - Sandy, Your Friendly Neighborhood Moderator[/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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