Discuss My redo of an old RPG

[Aberinkula]

[COLOR="77656"]Well, I want to redo Cursed Lands: Slumber of Ancient Earth, but I've decided to scrap some of the story-line and revive it with a new taste and new flare. If you want to read the original version, do so. here's the link: [URL="http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=56135"]CL:Original[/URL]

So first order of buisiness, I'm going to quote some parts of the original sign-up thread, and show you teh changes I'm making.

[QUOTE]Xandamite has been drilled from the planet, making Atlas start to die. But the people on the surface don?t know that it?s killing the planet.[/QUOTE]

Xandamite is a fictional element found in the planet Atlas. This is reminescent of mako from FF7. Xandamite and Atlas are Being kept. But the other towns are changing.

[QUOTE]Also they are unaware that the planet?s leading company for Xandamite drilling, Zangra is using it to create a super warrior. Not only are they a company but the president of the world Hiabata Zangra is the company?s creator. So far he?s committed crimes against humanity. Secretly. But just recently word got out that the Xandamite drilling is killing the planet. Currently protests have stopped. But one organization is trying to stop it. Requiem is a secret resistance consisting of only 10 members.[/QUOTE]

Zangra sounds too much like Shinra, so I'm scrapping that name, and the name of the creator. From now on the Company is called "Gantra Inc. and it's the ONLY Xandamite drilling company on the planet. Also the fact that it's owner is the president, is also being scrapped. THe owner's new name is Gantra Renzoukshi, but the company is funded by the goverment whos President is Gantra's brother.

Requim, the resistnace much like Avalanche, is also ebing scrapped for a new group callled Alpha-Blade, the members are going to be different also.

[QUOTE]One of the newest members, Alvash codename: Zero has just joined after quitting the president?s company. The resistance?s leader, Ezekiel codename: The Tesla has decided to take their plans further. His next plan is to attack the drill within sector 3, district 5. This is where the story starts.[/QUOTE]

I'm not going to reveal my new character, but he will be different than Alvash, and Ezekial is also being scrapped for another character, who I won't name either. codename's are being dropped, as I've decided that Alpha-Blade is going to disband by the end of the sign-ups.

[QUOTE]Alvash looked around after being let off the bus. His comrades, Louise and Jerry were standing at the drill?s gate. ?So this is the 5th district drill, eh?? Alvash asked through his handkerchief. Jerry nodded. ?Yes it is. Plus this our first drill to take down. Personally I thought we would have disbanded a month ago.? Alvash turned back to see Ezekiel get off the bus. ?Damn fools, always asking for bus fare to get out! Why?d the bastards past a law that you have to pay to get off, the bus. Pathetic!?

Alvash entered the door with the others. As he entered he saw an amazing site. the drill. He may have worked for Zandra but he was just a secretary. ?A beauty, right? Heh not for long!? Ezekial chuckled. Alvash looked up and down the structure then proceeded on. [/QUOTE]

I'm scrapping that completely. Instead, I'm going to have a conversation between two characters as to why Alpha-Blade is breaking up. But they will still be at the drill.

I'm also going to keep the sign-ups, with some added things. I didn't shed much light on the source of magic, or magic at all. But it's there. Find out when the sign-ups are out.

Anyways, I thought I'd shed some light on this project before I actually create it. Why? So I can see if these changes are what's needed. This version will be mroe refined, and the story will be more in depth. I'm still going with the original story-line I wanted beyond the sign-ups.

So, what do you guys think? Are these changes too much, or are these changes perfect? And also, would you be willing to join, or re-join if you were in the first one?[/COLOR]