cancer Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 [SIZE="1"]Here are examples of my work. Some of you may have seen some of these before. Please give your honest, constructive criticism. It'd be greatly appreciated. All of these were done in 2007.[/SIZE] [SIZE="1"]Vector Portrait[/SIZE] [IMG]http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg39/jmgordon7/Artwork/vectorportrait0001.jpg[/IMG] [SIZE="1"] Reaper Design[/SIZE] [IMG]http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg39/jmgordon7/Artwork/reaper.jpg[/IMG] [SIZE="1"]First Oil Painting[/SIZE] [IMG]http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg39/jmgordon7/Artwork/firstoilpainting5-2007.jpg[/IMG] [SIZE="1"]Ink Drawing[/SIZE] [IMG]http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg39/jmgordon7/Artwork/demonbglineart.jpg[/IMG] [SIZE="1"]Photoshop collage[/SIZE] [IMG]http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg39/jmgordon7/Artwork/deathbytelly.png[/IMG] [SIZE="1"]Color Pencil Still Life[/SIZE] [IMG]http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg39/jmgordon7/Artwork/colorpencil4.jpg[/IMG] [SIZE="1"]Color Pencil Portrait[/SIZE] [IMG]http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg39/jmgordon7/Artwork/colorpencil3.jpg[/IMG] [SIZE="1"]Color Pencil Portrait[/SIZE] [IMG]http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg39/jmgordon7/Artwork/colorpencil2.jpg[/IMG] [SIZE="1"]Color Pencil Portrait[/SIZE] [IMG]http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg39/jmgordon7/Artwork/colorpencil.jpg[/IMG] [SIZE="1"]Charcoal Portrait[/SIZE] [IMG]http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg39/jmgordon7/Artwork/charcoal.jpg[/IMG] [SIZE="1"] Charcoal master copy[/SIZE] [IMG]http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg39/jmgordon7/Artwork/100_0730.jpg[/IMG] [SIZE="1"] Mechanical Pencil master copy[/SIZE] [IMG]http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg39/jmgordon7/Artwork/100_0728.jpg[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2010DigitalBoy Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 [COLOR="DarkOrange"]I unfortunetaly can't be so very constructive because art is not my forte, however I believe that aynone who obsereves art whoud comment on it, and I know that every artist values their commentary. Now, I have a habit, like many do, of calling things 'great' or 'amazing' only to lump them in with everything else that's great or amazing. I would say, though, that some of your art sits on the higher tiers of what I consider great. Just going through, I don't have interest in still life or the two at the bottom, so I can't say much, but everything else is spectacular, especially your drawings of the goth kids and that utterly awesome TV-head w/ skull which would make a beautiful page in an album booklet. Now, for the ones that I found extra special. I definitely love the Reaper design. I'm a big fan of the Reaper's more uniqu looks and your is a great one, though I can't say much for the pot leaf background, lol. The ink drawing is also very badass and would probably make a sweet tattoo or something, too. Also, the oil one is just so wonderfully trippy that it's impossible not to love. [/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mihoruru Posted March 29, 2008 Share Posted March 29, 2008 awwww i LOVE the oil painting!!!! its so pretty and dramatic it reminds me of the poster of Wicked...^^+ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jigglyness Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 [SIZE="1"]Wow. I love the variety of mediums you use. Its nice to see artwork that isn't only done with pencil or just photoshop work. I love it. I really like your vector piece. For the reaper deisgn, to me, it is the weakest piece of the bunch. It's not quite up to the level as the rest of your work. It is a little flat, so maybe add some extra shadows in the coloring alongside the crosshatching. I think the oil painting is probably my favorite piece, since painting requires a completely different kind of skill than just sketching or coloring with markers. The inking piece is also very impressive. I like the clean lines. I REALLY like the still life of the tootsie pops. I love how you added color to it. It grabs my attention almost immediately. Great use of color. For the color pencil portrait of the girl from an angle, I think you should add more shading to her face so that it doesn't look as flat and 2 dimensional. I really like the perspective though, its so hard. For the two goth guys, amazing work. For the color pencil one, try to keep your colors more solid so that the whites of the paper don't show through as much. For the charcoal one, there's something strange with the lips, but I'm sure you've gotten that before, it looks VERY familiar. Snow White - The shading on the clothing is fabulous. Incorporate that kind of shading to her face and neck area. For the last two, those would make REALLY good portfolio pieces if you plan to go to an art school. As I said earlier, I like the diverse pieces.[/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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