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[SIZE="4"][B] Naruto: Path to Light[/B][/SIZE]



15 years have past by. Uzumaki Naruto is now officially the 7th hokage. Haruno Sakura is head of Konoha?s medical team. Uchiha Sasuke has made peace after finally taking revenge on his accursed brother Itachi and has joined Akatsuki in his brother?s place. The world that was once terrorized by Orichimaru and his legion of the sound has died down to little smuggle attempts and minor deaths of less important people. Konoha has finally been restored well than ever and new generations of shinobi have just graduated from the academy! These children have had, so far better talents than the generation of the great Uzumaki Naruto and Uchiha Sasuke?





As the world may be in peace, evil is stirring in the newly formed village of the fire. Shinobi from the fire have been reported to have ?unnatural? abilities. The villages of mist and sand have formed a treaty and have started keeping an eye on the village of fire. As all attempts to get close the village of fire have been either stopped or returned with no new leads?

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The idea of making this backstage forum was brought to my attention by Gekko. I'm sorry for changen the stuff, but yall didn't didn't have a personality thing. So I didn't know what yalls personalities were. He didn't show any sign of being a loaner is his posts. I don't know what you were talking about when you said I'm changing like the mood to fun or something. Isn't it supposed to be fun?
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[quote name='garmeil']The idea of making this backstage forum was brought to my attention by Gekko. I'm sorry for changen the stuff, but yall didn't didn't have a personality thing. So I didn't know what yalls personalities were. He didn't show any sign of being a loaner is his posts. I don't know what you were talking about when you said I'm changing like the mood to fun or something. Isn't it supposed to be fun?[/QUOTE]

uhh, lol, well he kinda did... The way he spoke in his posts and also [i]"As he went he saw Airi, a jounin of the Inuzuka clan native to Konoha. He would have said high were he not practically mime by nature."[/i] This was a fair description by The Enemy. You also changed the characters heritage. Despite their all living in some sort of a twisted version of, Feudal Japan(?), you changed they language into one that suited you better. You added words like "Yall". As if they were suddenly American southern.

Now it may seem silly of me to pick on the language since none of us probably speak Japanese. But I think that we can compensate for that by at least having dialog thats in a similar manner as Japanese in the Naruto setting. It makes the RPG sound that much more realistic.
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[quote name='Gecko']uhh, lol, well he kinda did... The way he spoke in his posts and also [i]"As he went he saw Airi, a jounin of the Inuzuka clan native to Konoha. He would have said high were he not practically mime by nature."[/i] This was a fair description by The Enemy. You also changed the characters heritage. Despite their all living in some sort of a twisted version of, Feudal Japan(?), you changed they language into one that suited you better. You added words like "Yall". As if they were suddenly American southern.

Now it may seem silly of me to pick on the language since none of us probably speak Japanese. But I think that we can compensate for that by at least having dialog thats in a similar manner as Japanese in the Naruto setting. It makes the RPG sound that much more realistic.[/QUOTE]

I didn't know what it meant when he said mime by nature. And well if he couldn't speak any japenese then he wouldn't say anyhting. So I don't think every thing has to be exactly perfect. I forgot about him only being able to talk asian. So sorry bout that. And as for me using yall. I was born in texas and it's a habit to use that word. Sorry I can't stop doing what I normaly do.
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Also note about my character, he wouldn't act so surprised when he came in warning about ur guy disapearing for he doesn't talk too much and is very calm and calculating about his actions, plus there was a female bug on you so i'd still probably be able to track you quite well.
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[quote name='garmeil']I didn't know what it meant when he said mime by nature. And well if he couldn't speak any japenese then he wouldn't say anyhting. So I don't think every thing has to be exactly perfect. I forgot about him only being able to talk asian. So sorry bout that. And as for me using yall. I was born in texas and it's a habit to use that word. Sorry I can't stop doing what I normaly do.[/QUOTE]

Well that's what "Roleplaying" is. You act according to the character, not according to your habits. You know that these characters shouldn't saying things like Yall, so you make it right.

And Koro speaks Japanese. My character Donobu, doesn't. That much of the story maybe you just got confused.

And mimes don't talk, hence "mime by nature" means he doesn't talk. And since The Enemy said "[i]practically[/i] mime by nature", that just means he doesn't talk much.

In general you seemed to branch the story off from what everyone else comes up with. In your last post you suddenly changed the scene from what it was to something completely off track. Donobu just arrived everyone is surprised and don't know who he is. And suddenly you changed things to [i]Gekko stands up and talks to Koro like they're old highschool football buddies[/i]. We are building a continues story, acting off of what the other characters have done and said, just try to remember that.

Anyway, all that we ask is that you try to act the scenes out while keeping in mind what kind if characters the other players are. So that they don't do things that are out of character for them.

Also, to be completely frank, although this isn't a demand or anything:... I think it would be nice if you changed your last post. It just sets weird things into motion that don't make sense to me.

[B]Edit:[/B] Awe dang. Me and The Enemy made a simotanious post. What now? :S

I put so much time into mine :'(

[COLOR="Green"][SIZE="1"]Please do not post twice in a row, but use the edit-button to add things to your first post instead. Thank you!
- Sandy[/SIZE][/COLOR]
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i didnt know ant of this...but why do these characters not have romance?
[quote name='garmeil'][SIZE="4"][B] Naruto: Path to Light[/B][/SIZE]



15 years have past by. Uzumaki Naruto is now officially the 7th hokage. Haruno Sakura is head of Konoha?s medical team. Uchiha Sasuke has made peace after finally taking revenge on his accursed brother Itachi and has joined Akatsuki in his brother?s place. The world that was once terrorized by Orichimaru and his legion of the sound has died down to little smuggle attempts and minor deaths of less important people. Konoha has finally been restored well than ever and new generations of shinobi have just graduated from the academy! These children have had, so far better talents than the generation of the great Uzumaki Naruto and Uchiha Sasuke?





As the world may be in peace, evil is stirring in the newly formed village of the fire. Shinobi from the fire have been reported to have ?unnatural? abilities. The villages of mist and sand have formed a treaty and have started keeping an eye on the village of fire. As all attempts to get close the village of fire have been either stopped or returned with no new leads?

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

The idea of making this backstage forum was brought to my attention by Gekko. I'm sorry for changen the stuff, but yall didn't didn't have a personality thing. So I didn't know what yalls personalities were. He didn't show any sign of being a loaner is his posts. I don't know what you were talking about when you said I'm changing like the mood to fun or something. Isn't it supposed to be fun?[/QUOTE]
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  • 1 month later...
This is kind of late, but how the hair got in the screwed-up potion that made Nei was the fact they had the window open due to fumes, the wind was blowing, and humans shed. That explains most of everything I thought would be questioned by anybody.

Any questions about Nei, just ask me. I have plenty of free time on my hands now.

One last thing: don't forget that I have a character too! I'd lide some interaction with her!
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