Writing My lyrics

[Lionheart]

[SIZE="1"]Haven't been on in awhile. Here are some lyrics that I have written for the past month. would kill for some feedback.

[CENTER][B]Stand and learn to Survive[/B][/CENTER]

Words without a cause
and we?re suffering
Pyro starts to build
and we?re waiting
(To Rise up, to rise up)
unleash the beast within
time to end this
You will lose it all
and we?re waiting
(to rise up, to rise against...
The ones who bind us all

You can?t tell me what to do
I will make you lose
Now its time to fight
Stand and learn to survive.
You will fall against the ground
Punish? You let us down
Now its time to fight
Stand and learn to survive.

Set and learn the code
The rebellion
Whispers in the dark
rush to freedom
(to rise up, to rise up)
unleash the beast within
time to end this
you will lose it all
and we?re waiting
(to rise up, to rise against...
The ones who bind us all....

You can?t tell me what to do
I will make you lose
Now its time to fight
Stand and learn to survive.
You will fall against the ground
Punish? You let us down
Now its time to fight
Stand and learn to survive.

Do you remember how?
Love, no you bring us down!
Do you remember how?
When I called your name out now

The ones who bind us all....
You can?t tell me what to do
I will make you lose
Now its time to fight

You can?t tell me what to do
I will make you lose
Now its time to fight
Stand and learn to survive.
You will fall against the ground
Punish? You let us down
Now its time to fight
Now its time to fight
(fight)
Stand and learn to survive!
Stand and learn to survive!
Stand and learn to survive!!!



[CENTER][B]
My World[/B][/CENTER]

See? Nothing yet. I cannot be beat while I still breath. Perfection is so here
(Reign over me)

Swim so deep, my lungs will eventually break
(eventually break)
A defense that never falls apart, is so well
There is no god
There is no hell
consequences will burden throughout your life
This isn?t your world
world
world

Life and death will intertwine
Separate the heart
Make you weak, and let you see
The thing you?ve become
Life and death will intertwine
Make the beast, lose it?s prey....

Your words, begin to lose it?s touch
(lose it?s touch)
divided you stand, lost in trans, ready to give in?
God are you there?
Am I in hell?
Consequences have destroyed what is left of my life
This isn?t your world
world
world

Life and death will intertwine
Separate the heart
Make you weak, and let you see
The thing you?ve become
Life and death will intertwine
Make the beast, lose it?s prey....

Open your eyes, are you ready to begin?
Karma is part of life
Open your eyes, are you ready to begin?
Put this on yourself
Open your eyes, are you ready to begin?
Karma is part of life
Open your eyes, are you ready to begin?
Put this on yourself

This isn?t your world
This is ours
This isn?t your world
This is god?s

Life and death will intertwine
Separate the heart
Make you weak, and let you see
The thing you?ve become
Life and death will intertwine
Make the beast, lose it?s prey....


[CENTER][B]Fake it to play me[/B][/CENTER]

left alone once again
These cold winds punish my skin
Why do they always play me?
I?m sick of the words so sorry.
Pissed of, display of weakness
spread the news, he?s a freak
Stop talking of made-up bullshit
The truth is right in your eyes

This piece of me
Won?t be unseen
Just put the gun against my head

Fake it to play me
Too shy to tell me
Go ahead and pull the trigger now
Not a bad person?
Just an allusion
Go ahead and show me who you are

Mute the words from my mouth
shield your eyes from my stare
Is this your so called ending?
Is this your so called erasing?
I am unintelligent
You are a Terrorist
Why do I always forfeit?
Because it?s easy to quit.

This piece of me
Won?t be unseen
Juts put the gun against my head

Fake it to play me
Too shy to tell me
Go ahead and pull the trigger now
Not a bad person?
Just an allusion
Go ahead and show me who you are


Fake it to play me
Too shy to tell me
Go ahead and pull the trigger now
Not a bad person?
Just an allusion
Go ahead and show me who you are
who you are
pull the trigger now
who you are
pull the trigger now.....[/SIZE]