Chaotictwilight Posted March 8, 2008 Share Posted March 8, 2008 I've noticed that there are a lot of poem threads around this part of Otakuboards and perhaps thought that it would be best if there was a single thread for all of the future ones; that way, if someone is just craving poems then it's easier for them to find since they'll be together. It would also beneft the poet since that way they'll have a higher chance for their poem to be noticed...or at least that's what I think. This might either be a good idea or a bad idea, don't know until I try, right? As for the one I'm going to post, it was written a few years back and I was going through some dark times, so I'm sorry if it's a little too depressing. :animeswea The odd thing was, at first it was just going to be the first couple lines, and right after I saw an episode of Yu-ghi-oh, the rest of the lines just came to my head. [CENTER]Lost In Death[/CENTER] I once had a small house That had a brown mouse Where I was happy as can be For I had no new enemy But now I am lost in this world Searching for things that I can?t find That would remind me of my past That was taken away so fast But all that is gone And so am I Like a faint glimmer in the sky Always to be forgotten But never to be remembered So this is how death feels It feels dark It feels cold I can?t see anything So all I do is wander aimlessly With no purpose Nor any sense of direction If this is death Where are the angels? Where are the demons? Is all that I have been told a lie? Am I really dead? Maybe I?m merely unconscious No, I?m dead Dead to the world Dead to myself Just like I have always been Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3minds Posted March 23, 2008 Share Posted March 23, 2008 I'm really starting to like you:blush: To two old friends in memory of Cocaine’s perfume Her skin was the color white like, a powdery snow my friend lost his sense he breathed her scent up his nose Breathed her scent until his face started to look old Her scent is what made his body cold He breathed in so much of her scent it made him choke His love for her scent caused him to overdose And when his life was over it caused his mom to become sober And her scent has forced us to remember her name Never forget the perfume of cocaine -------- Not many poets in the OB. [INDENT][FONT="Arial"][SIZE="1"][COLOR="Blue"]Hey, 3minds. (^_^) Here at the Boards, we encourage members not to double-post. Instead, we have an Edit button if you feel the need to add information to a prior post. If you're wanting to bump a thread, you can always delete and repost your old post as well; this avoids cluttering a thread with spam, and makes it easier to find the actual content in a thread. I'd also like to direct you to the[/COLOR] [URL="http://www.otakuboards.com/rules/OtakuBoards%3A%20Rules.html"]Forum[/URL] [COLOR="Blue"]rules and the [/COLOR][URL="http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=56606"]Anthology[/URL] [COLOR="Blue"]rules sticky. Give them a quick once-over to get the general idea, and feel free to hit me (or any other moderator) with a pm if you have any questions. And yeah, as you noticed, it is a little quieter around this sector than most of the others. I try to look at each new submission and see what I can offer, but poetry is not my strong suit—I lean more towards prose and essay-type material. Good to see you, though. Have fun, enjoy yourself here, and keep writing. [INDENT]–Allamorph[/INDENT][/COLOR][/SIZE][/FONT][/INDENT] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aberinkula Posted March 23, 2008 Share Posted March 23, 2008 [SIZE="1"][FONT="Book Antiqua"][COLOR="DarkSlateGray"]Not much respect for the rules either. Anyways, just decided to say that we've already had a thread like this before, it's not that old either. I'll link it soon, but just a heads up for next time. [URL="http://otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=56992"]Click here.[/URL] I honestly think it should have been stick-ified, but anyways, that's the old thread.[/COLOR][/FONT][/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathKnight Posted March 24, 2008 Share Posted March 24, 2008 [quote name='Aberinkula'][SIZE="1"][FONT="Book Antiqua"][COLOR="DarkSlateGray"][URL="http://otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=56992"]Click here.[/URL] I honestly think it should have been stick-ified, but anyways, that's the old thread.[/COLOR][/FONT][/SIZE][/QUOTE] [color=crimson]Haha, no kidding.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mihoruru Posted March 29, 2008 Share Posted March 29, 2008 ooooh i've got one... Innocence On the edge of the Sky, i found a flower One so beautiful that none dared to approach In fear that its beauty will outshine all other. Ashamed, i backed away leaving it to be torn apart by loneliness and misery As i departed, its cry shook me Like nothing has ever touched me before still, my jealousy pushed me away farther and farther until i was unable to find it again. Guilt became a fire writhing inside of me And soon i began searching The corners of this universe For the pathetic, sorrowful flower After many years I saw it again This time, in the hands of a child who's laughter rang out like a thousand stars singing in the wind And the flower became a delicate ornament to the child's naive laughter Beauty, be it a blessing or a curse, brings delight and happiness to the purest innocences of this world and rejoice the fools shall when beauty shines itself before their honest eyes. =D its...not too badly worded, i suppose...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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