Art Kairifran's art!

[Kairifran14]

[FONT="Comic Sans MS"][SIZE="3"][COLOR="DarkOrchid"]hiya! Well i'm sorta kinda new (I've been here a bit just don't post a lot) and I draw a lot and think I should make mah own art thread! Tell me what you think! Plz point out what you think I need to improve on!

[IMG]http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm101/DeathlyMoonGoddess/queen.jpg[/IMG]
^ Demon Queen

[IMG]http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm101/DeathlyMoonGoddess/Tessa.jpg[/IMG]
^Tessa

[IMG]http://i294.photobucket.com/albums/mm101/DeathlyMoonGoddess/bleedingangel.jpg[/IMG]
^Dieing angel (Song is Scream, Aim, Fire! by Bullet for my Valentine)

Right now you only get 3! *freaks out* (Oh god you can see through the paper!)[/COLOR][/SIZE][/FONT]

[jigglyness]

[SIZE=1]I think you're on the right track. Try to clean up your lines a little though so it doesn't look as messy. For the first one, I think her hip/waist is too small. Make it wider to that its more in proportions with her upper half. Keep practicing. I see a lot of potential. :][/SIZE]

[Kairifran14]

[quote name='jigglyness'][SIZE=1]I think you're on the right track. Try to clean up your lines a little though so it doesn't look as messy. For the first one, I think her hip/waist is too small. Make it wider to that its more in proportions with her upper half. Keep practicing. I see a lot of potential. :][/SIZE][/QUOTE]

[SIZE="3"][FONT="Comic Sans MS"][COLOR="DarkOrchid"]Thank you.... I'll work on the llines thing..... The top gurl is the oldest pic I uploaded I think.... yup i'm pretty she's the oldest lol. Thank you again :)[/COLOR][/FONT][/SIZE]

[eleanor]

[font=trebuchet ms] Be mindful of proportion. In your first picture, the girl's bust alone is wider than her hips. The general idea of the "perfect body" for a female is that her body is shaped like an hourglass, so the width of the shoulders match the width of the hips (but don't get all technical and start measuring the lengths).

By no means am I telling that you must draw an hourglass figure, but I think it's a good idea that learning artists get down basic forms before experimenting with other body forms, like athletic, pear-shaped, overweight, etc.

But other than that, the biggest feedback I can give you is to practice more! You'll come to see that as you draw more and more, your lines naturally become more confident, which results in sketches with single lines making up greater portions of the drawing.

Like jigglyness said, you're on the right track- everything looks pretty good for you! :)[/font]

[Kairifran14]

[FONT="Comic Sans MS"][SIZE="3"][COLOR="DarkOrchid"]Thank you! Yea.... I've gotten better at the hour glass figure in the last few months.... and now mih new bad habit is making mih chars. to lanky..... Oh well, I'm still learning :^) But Thanks for constructive criticism.... I prefer to get that.


Okays, now more piccys.... Sorry to give you a link, but this way I don't haveta wait a year a post a pic :)

[url]http://deathlymoongoddess.deviantart.com/art/Mina-90011696[/url]

[url]http://deathlymoongoddess.deviantart.com/art/Light-Fire-88388079[/url]

[url]http://deathlymoongoddess.deviantart.com/art/Echo-Cybele-Fran-2-90669621[/url]

[url]http://deathlymoongoddess.deviantart.com/art/Kyoto-in-norm-outfit-88925162[/url]

[url]http://deathlymoongoddess.deviantart.com/art/Ekko-92860178[/url]

Okay... This time you get 5 :)[/COLOR][/SIZE][/FONT]