Art Bleach artwork

[Paizy]

Since I became addicted to Bleach I've done many fanarts lately. I only recently started doing digital art, so most of these are done with traditional media, such as markers or colored pencils. Tell me what you think, I want to improve as much as possible...just don't be too mean. XD

[url]http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm252/Paizy/v.jpg[/url]

[url]http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm252/Paizy/a.jpg[/url]

[url]http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm252/Paizy/b.jpg[/url]

[url]http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm252/Paizy/c.jpg[/url]

[url]http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm252/Paizy/tc.jpg[/url]

[url]http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm252/Paizy/r.jpg[/url]

[url]http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm252/Paizy/f.jpg[/url]

[url]http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm252/Paizy/m.jpg[/url]

[url]http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm252/Paizy/k.jpg[/url]

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[yakiimo]

First of all, I love Yuu Watase. :D Alice 19th is awesome!

On to the art.

You show a lot of attention to detail. I think the thing that stands out the most are the expressions. I can see that you're trying, but I don't get much emotion behind them. You capture the dynamics of body movement well, though the torso on C looks a little off from the arm. Too thin maybe?

You've got a good grasp on style, but your lines are so harsh. Even with sweeping fabrics of your clothing there are a lot of sharp points and angles. Clothes flow, as does hair (though some anime defy that!). C, B, and V all three have clothes that should be moving, but I see a lot of hard angles.

Again, your sense of the style is pretty good. In a lot of the pictures, most notably A, the hands are huge. I know in a lot of shoujo manga rampant with bishounen (mostly BL manga) the boys' hands can be rather large. But I think his hand is a bit too big. Hold your own hand up to your face to judge the general size. And look at mens' hands. Ask your dad if you can see his. I've done that before.

For a suggestion on expressions, try looking up "expressions" on deviantart or some other art site. You can do full pages of nothing but expressions. Take your favorite manga and really try to understand the reasons behind the expressions. When Alice is betrayed by her sister, she cries. Think to when someone has betrayed you. If no one ever has, then it might be hard to relate. Don't just draw the expression, try to feel the emotion. Contort your face if you have to. That's what I do.

Good luck with your drawing. I really like the coloring job you do!