Frankie Posted October 7, 2008 Share Posted October 7, 2008 [FONT=Verdana][SIZE=2][FONT=Tahoma][SIZE=1][B][center]The Planet of Solkudor[/center][/B][/SIZE][/FONT] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]Far from earth there is a planet. A relatively small planet, half the size of earth. The terrain is not unlike earth. Same kind of plants, same kind of animals, and humans as well. Thing is, the plants and animals are not native. Human scientists, after the planets decline and extinction of all animal species and almost all plant species needed a way to restart the planet. With their technology they sent scouts out in every direction in look of samples. Only three ships returned out of the six that were sent out.[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]The first ship brought back unfortunate news that their ship encountered engine difficulties while approaching a life covered planet. The second ship also brought back unfortunate news that in his entire search no such sample was found. The third ship returned and with fascinating news. A planet far from there had life, although much more primitive than theirs. Their technology was far less advance, but the planet itself was full of life. His scout had even returned with a few plants, some seeds, and a few harmless animals as proof.[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]The scientists enrolled the help of what was left of the government. Many cloaked ships entered and left earth over the course of several years. First acquiring enough plant samples to keep their atmosphere from failing. Then came edible crops to feed the small population. Following that came the animals and the decorative things. Some scouts were able to blend in with the humans of earth and acquire information on the things they gathered. [/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]Centuries later, Solkudor, once an almost dead planet was now thriving and the people led very comfortable lives... But all peaceful times come to an end.[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]The planet comprised of four large land masses surrounded by deep oceans. Each continent had its own government, laws, and style of technology. War began to brew between these four continents for one thing or another. Either it was weapons, or technology, crops or resources not native to one continent but native to another. War raged, and finally slowed down to a small scale battle for trade routes here and there, but little did any of the know, deep underground the real cause for war had sprouted.[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana][B][center]Underground Facility[/center][/B][/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]A Scientist stares through a high tech microscope at a sample of blood. Changing the magnification a look of shock crossed his face. Just then a door slammed behind him. In even more shock he looks up and turns his chair to see who entered his office so late at night. At realizing it was his boss he relaxed.[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]"How are things going Vin?" The tall narrow man asked, his narrow eyes deep and emotionless.[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]The scientist nervously slides his chair out of the way and gestures towards the microscope. "Very well sir! The two samples mixed perfectly!"[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]A small look of pleasure crossed the man's face as he crossed the room to look for himself. Upon seeing the results he grinned a grin that sent chills down even his closest employees. "Very good. Move to the next phase, I want a LIVE subject by next week!"[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]"But sir! Even with the equipment here, that would only produce a very small subject, not nearly full grown!"[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]"I don?t care, I want to see how well the process works before we move to full human testing. No use wasting perfectly good volunteers." The man the left the room as if he had never been there.[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana][B][center]One Year Later[/center][/B][/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]The narrow man walked a long hall lined with windows. The windows looked into rooms where human subjects lived as normally as possible while being monitored for unwanted behaviors and possible hiccups in earlier growth experiments. After they solved the combining they had to make it possible to combine it with yet another sample of DNA. Humans. After many failures, and many vicious child like abominations they had to alter the growth process.[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]As the man walked the hallways he was people eating, reading, watching the video screens. Simple... Normal. This pleased the man very much. He turned down another hall and went down a floor via some very darkly lit lights. This floor had no living quarters. It consisted of a huge gym and training rooms. He observed two men sparing on the mats. Two large muscular men both about the same in height and weight fought as though they hated each other. Shortly after one pinned the other they shook hands, joked a bit, and refreshed themselves with drink. The narrow man approached them.[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]"Hand to Hand combat training I see? Went well did it?"[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]Both men almost dropped their bottles at the man's voice. "Yes sir!" They both replied.[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]"Very good, May we venture to the larger room and you can show me your more..." He paused and gave them a sly sinister look, "More advance fighting skills."[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]Both men knew this was by no means a simple suggestion, a direct order was more like it and shortly after that they were in another room. This room was larger, and had no equipment in it.[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]"No kill right Mr. Zith?" One of the men asked the narrow man.[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]Mr. Zith grinned, "Although that would please me, to see your full power, we have very little fully operation units at this time, so no, please only damage each other. Damages can be fixed."[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]Both men secret thanked the gods and each took a side of the room. The fight began at Mr. Zith's clap.[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]Before each man even moved a foot, other changes had begun. One man's muscles bulged and bones cracked. The other man quickly followed with the same behavior but shortly after that it was obvious these two men were very different.[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]One man stood, four thick legs covered in brown fur, a large body and visibly no tail. He looked like a bear, except for the fact his head was that of a cobra. The other man was far larger, his grey thick hide was going to provide him with far more protection against claws. Wit the body of a rhino, partial features from a rhino, and a lion for his head, he looked far stronger than the other man, and in the end of a massive battle he proved to be the superior.[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]His thick hide protected him from most of the other mans attacks, even the cobra head's fangs couldn?t penetrate the thick tough skin and soon the other man had called it. Once over both men transformed back, their bodies barely showing the injuries all except for the deeper cuts.[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]Mr. Zith kept his emotionless face this time, "Very nice, although it was not the best match on the beast side, however, you won?t be fighting others like yourself so there is still use for you." He was looking at the man who was the bear, and that man knew that had things been different, he would have been disposed of.[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]Mr. Zith returned to his office for a good drink when his assistant entered, "Another escape today sir."[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]"Where to? And who?"[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]The woman with a tired face sighed, "The six newest volunteer?s sir. All of which have stole one of our cloak ships and fled the planet. Earth was the direction they were headed."[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]"Eh let them be." He waved his hands in aggravation, "Earth is none of my concern."[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]"But sir, they were our products were they not? Also, why wouldn?t you want to take earth instead of our own planet? Its larger for sure, your kingdom would be great."[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]"It would be primitive. Earth is a rock, Shanea, A useless rock that doesn?t even produce Shizray, our technology's key ingredient. Now earth is useless, as are the inhabitants, any units that even make it that far are of no worth retrieving." He took a long drink and sighed, "Was that it?"[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]"Yes sir." And the woman left.[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]"Useless..." He muttered.[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana][B][center]------[/center][/B][/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]Congratulations, you endured it this long! 100,000 COOKIES FOR YOU! Ok, now I know this was long and, sort of uninformative but it?s the basic beginnings of my planet in a comic I am working on.[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]The RPG idea will also be based on my comic, however unlike my comic the plot could go either way really, and it?s not set in stone like the comic.[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]In this RPG, should I ever get it off the ground, is kind of like animorphs and the game Impossible Creatures, on some serious crack. Nothing like animorphs other than the animal thing. Only like Impossible Creatures because of the fact it?s mixing two animals together (I.E. Bear + Cobra) But this is on humans, and once they were changed, they weren?t human any more.[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]So the people who sign up would be descendants of those whom escaped to earth. Yes that gets explained in the RPG. But basically, it comes down to decedents have learned to live on earth as normal humans, no changing, no NOTHING, their other form was completely non existent. It had to be if they didn?t want to be dissected or studied. Until one day, someone comes to earth hoping to find all the escaped units, and their children and their children?s children (yes they do have extended lifespan) to create an army and return to Solkudor and free the four continents from the Zith facilities attacks.[/FONT][/SIZE] [SIZE=2][FONT=Verdana]I think ill stop writing now, you poor people, anyways if you read through all of this and would be entering the RPG I have hopes that you will reply and let me know what you think and such. It?s been a while since I posted on OB, let alone made an RPG.[/FONT][/SIZE] [/SIZE][/FONT] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GothikMoon Posted October 12, 2008 Share Posted October 12, 2008 I think it sounds good! I'll deffinately sign up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frankie Posted October 23, 2008 Author Share Posted October 23, 2008 Ok some details to be noted so far: The club and bar is all aged, It has two sides, the entrance leads to the all ages side, well so long as your 13 and up, serves food like pizza burgers whatever, and soda's and stuff like that. Then towards the back there is a door that leads to the adult club and bar where all the kids stuff is served, along with alcoholic beverages ranging from beer to jeack daniels and so on so forth. There are booths, tables, and a bar to sit at in each side (you just cant order alcohol on the kids side obviously. To get into the adults area you have to meed up with a hefty guy named Freddy, the bouncer, and he checks the ids... thats pretty basic... the club also plays music people can really get down and dance to, be wild and whatever As for the changing each person, when they change, has one or two traits that change first, for example, Avian's hair changes to form more feather like appearance, and her tail grows... and as stated in HotShotGurl's pose Zum's ears seem to appear first,... But no bloody roar looking peoples running around, once you start to change either you go all the way or you realize your in the subway station frowing furry tails and you stop yourself :D Either way works lol but hopefully your characters know well enough by now not to go changing in the subway station :) or any public place for that matter heh. Avian has alot of money, and powerful friends, for someone whos been on earth a tiny 9 months seems kinda odd, lets just say shes met her fair share of the wrong kind of crowd, maybe inhereited a bit of stuff, and using her knowledge of earth made something of herself in hopes of getting around and finding others like herself. :D her past, whether it be on Solkudor, or earth, is something she doesnt talk about alot... Youll see tidbits here and there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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