Writing My Wrestling Fan Fiction

[Guest Kaimaster]

This how I would pretray myself. After I just brought the WWE without the WWE fans know it.

On Monday Night RAW. In the Main Event. It was HHH VS VKM Jr. Kaimaster was sitting in the front row and hold a sign that reads WWE stinks and TNA Rules. They had enough of Kaimaster's TNA Pride. So they double team Kaimaster. VKM won the match.

On ECW. Kaimaster replay the clip of the RAW. Then Kaimaster came on the screen and Kaimaster said, "ECW You were once great. Now you are a puppet for the Satan himself Vince McMahon." The screen went off.

On Smackdown Kaimaster came on screen and said, "Shane McMahon your Green eye monster you called your father. He thought that WCW and ECW was bad when they join forces. I have strong group that he never ever encounter before." The screen went off.

On Monday Night RAW Instead of the RAW music. You hear WCW Nirto song.
VKM said, "What do you want from me. I know it's you Kaimaster. Come on out" Kaimaster come on screen and said, "When I fell better after you beat me to a plup. first off I want to address to all of the Entertainers from All three brands. Tomorrow on ECW."

On ECW. All of the WWE Entertainers from all three brands was in around or in the wrestling ring. Vince,Shane,Stephanie & Linda McMahon they asked, "What's up with you. Why do you want us all be here for KAIMASTER?" Kaimaster said, "I just brought WWE now I have a big plans for WWE. I'll remake WWE into the wrestling should be." Vince said, "Wait uh min how did you buy the WWE under me?" Kaimaster said, "After you and you so called Son-in-law double team me. You wrote on a conact any body that VINCE KENNDY MCMAHON OR A FAMILY MEMBER HURT A WRESTLING FAN. THAT WRESTLING FAN GETS TO OWN THE WWE Until they die."

Kaimaster went off the screen then came back on the screen. I almost forgot to tell you Vince. You have no respect for any wrestlers oops I meant to say you don't have any respect for any Entertainers. NOW IT'S A WAR. Any way Vince you can't trust any body in that ring right now.Kaimaster went off the screen.

[Drizzt Do'urden]

I know you had mentioned your condition in one other thread that affects your grammar so I won't touch on that.

This is actually one of your better pieces, I'm not sure if you're learning or this is just something you feel more comfortable with. Plus you didn't mention kissing or anything else which I like. I'll keep up with this one, just make sure when it comes to your matches you go into detail about it, you know mention every move don't just bounce from the match starting to someone winning.

[Guest Kaimaster]

In every RAW Shows, ECW shows and Smackdown Kaimaster used the WCW Nirto for a year now. On WWE.com the Fans are complaining about it.

On a Smackdown the Entertainers from All three brands. STORM OUT to the ring and asked by yelling, "KAIMASTER WHAT DO YOU WANT?" Kaimaster came on screen said, "Let me come out there." So I would go out to stand on the entrance stage. Vince said, "Kaimaster you are a fool to come out here by yourself." Kaimaster said, "I'm not alone." the arena went black and the TNA's old muisc, Adrenaline Rush comes on. Then Mystereous wrestler beat up all of the WWE Wrestlers.

[Raiha]

[COLOR="DarkOrchid"][FONT="Times New Roman"]I'm not sure what's precisely going on because you have this strange tendency to gloss over the action. "The mysterious wrestler beat up all of the WWE Wrestlers."

Well how? And why? And what did it look like? Were there words spoken? Did the crowd go wild?

Leaving out the action there isn't much going on that can hook in people. Writing about something as macho as wrestling usually has to depend on events of pure unadulterated violence to make people interested.

And as far as the grammar, I do not think there is a free pass to be had when the lowliest of MS word applications has spellcheck. The spelling and grammar will be checked for you, eliminating any real need to focus on it. However the technical errors and typos and formatting mistakes make this difficult to delve further into. [/FONT][/COLOR]