Writing A fairy tale of only so many words

[Boo]

[size=1]What you are about to read

Is the most Fastastic

The most Wonderful

Love Story you'll ever read

Are you ready? Here goes...



Once upon a not so long ago

There were a boy and a girl

A boy and a girl who were in Love

A Love that one could find only

in Fairy Tales.

The ordinary boy who'd fall in Love

with the beautiful and marvellous girl in the whole wide world.

The two had met on a fateful day

and since had been writing back and forth

letter after letter, word after word

kiss after kiss, promise after promise

Because what you should know

is that the two lived apart from each other

A long distance, divided by a huge forest

But one day the girl was tired of waiting.

She sneaked out, travelled for miles

and arriving at the end, she fell

right into the arms of the boy

They vowed never to part

Though they knew it would not be easy

And they both had commitments at home

So from then on, they'd visit each other

when they could. It was not very often

Once a month, sometimes a two months

But they saw and could hold each other

He'd play music for her, and she'd dance

And when she did, the world would sing along

She’d teach him how to dance, how to kiss

She’d even teach him how to tie a bow

And the boy would smile clumsily and

do his best to impress her when he could.

They were happy like this,

But they wanted to be together more

As time passed by, so did life

and they wanted to spend that time together

So they started planning something big

the construction of a castle

the most marvellous castle in the world

It would have a huge garden,

with a lake, elephants, a trampoline

and everything they’d wish for…

But life took control of their time

And they saw each other less,

And the plans of the castle -

Those became shimmers of what they were

Due time, the boy didn’t send as many letters

the girl noticed he was distracted and busy

He’d stopped sending cards and gifts

And the girl was afraid he’d stopped loving her

So one day she decided to go to the boy again

As she crossed the distance, something happened

She bumped into something, big and grey

In front of her stood an elephant, big and strong

She was so amazed that she fell on her bottom

As she looked up, she could see something,

something even more amazing, behind the elephant

the most marvellous castle in the world

and as she looked around in the gigantic garden,

passing the gorgeous lake, she saw someone working

and as she came closer, she recognised the boy

the boy who was just finishing setting up a trampoline.





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Und wann sie nicht gestorben sind, leben sie nocht heute.
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[Cyriel]

[SIZE="1"][COLOR="Navy"]So sweet and sincere. I could see the illustrations as if it was a childrens' book unfolding before me. Even though it's about the complications of the long-distance relationship, it has that frank tenderness of a child.[/COLOR][/SIZE]

[Boo]

[quote name='Cyriel'][SIZE="1"][COLOR="Navy"]So sweet and sincere. I could see the illustrations as if it was a childrens' book unfolding before me. Even though it's about the complications of the long-distance relationship, it has that frank tenderness of a child.[/COLOR][/SIZE][/QUOTE]
[size=1]Thanks yous. <3[/size]

[CaNz]

Simple and sweet.

it must have taken forever to condense your feelings into an easy to understand concept.