Blue Posted July 20, 2010 Share Posted July 20, 2010 When you're down And you take a look around all you see are fools dancing in the rain When you're down And you take a look around You feel like you're the only one in pain When you're down feeling empty and broken you take a look around and you feel like you're the clown When you're down and you take a look around all you see are houses in the rain When you're down and you take a look around in the mirror you see your own frown Feeling empty and broken with everyone in town looking like bright blue flowers You start to feel a little insane Nothing seems right nothing seems to last forever except when you're down your house is made out of cold blue rain But who is to blame Everything just seems so lame When you're down and the only one in town Hollowed bricks seem to be more sane but maybe you're just insane Just a little poem that started playing in my head while I was reflecting on some things. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CaNz Posted July 20, 2010 Share Posted July 20, 2010 this poem really cheered me up! ...just messing with you... but it was good... I would post my own but i get terribly embarrassed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue Posted July 21, 2010 Author Share Posted July 21, 2010 Glad I could cheer someone up. XD But yeah, none of my work (be it writing or graphic) sing the happy tune. Whatever little creativity I have only comes out when I'm down in the gutter swimming with the rotten fish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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