Claire Posted February 27, 2011 Share Posted February 27, 2011 There's a lady in red with eyes feline green who came a long way from under the floor. Her cheeks cut with thick lines of rouge colored war paint, and a fire doused with pure gasoline. There's light, hard and cold. A barrage from the screen won't reach her thousand year stare anymore. She remembers the rain when the roof sprouted pores-- Dripping wet--cartridge storm--all the scarlet unseen-- and nothing remained when the flood ebbed away. Inside steel and ice, but ice somehow still soft enough for jilted bullets to char. She became a firework, a plosive fillet. As she fizzled out--an inglorious kill-- her blaze laughed aloud: [i]au revoir, au revoir.[/i] --- Squeezed this one out for class. We were supposed to write a sonnet, an ode, or an elegy, and I decided to try a semi-Petrarchan form. I will give a long-distance high five to anyone who can decipher it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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