Axel Posted August 17, 2014 Share Posted August 17, 2014 In fresh mornings I greet you. My island home. Surrounded by a shawl of turquiose. Crowned by the most majestic of mountains. Your waves caress my feet like the touch of an old friend. Your balmy breeze fills my senses. Olive trees in the evening, with a jasmine kiss... The smell of home. showmemark 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yu-Gi-Omg Posted January 29, 2015 Share Posted January 29, 2015 In fresh mornings I greet you. My island home. Surrounded by a shawl of turquiose. Crowned by the most majestic of mountains. Your waves caress my feet like the touch of an old friend. Your balmy breeze fills my senses. Olive trees in the evening, with a jasmine kiss... The smell of home. I love how clear of an image I get from this poem! Great job! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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