Yu-Gi-Omg Posted January 29, 2015 Share Posted January 29, 2015 (edited) Here is another one! silent rumble kick in the silent thunder wait for the flashes splashes - my vision a blur and my limbs afreezing, my speech just a mumble a slur but my eyes aflame no rain will tame these kick in the thunder silent but strong and know that I'm ready to rumble. Edited January 29, 2015 by Yu-Gi-Omg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CaNz Posted February 1, 2015 Share Posted February 1, 2015 Okay, this one seems more like a person getting ready to take a barfight outside than anything storm related. I could be wrong though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yu-Gi-Omg Posted February 3, 2015 Author Share Posted February 3, 2015 Thanks for your replies! :D I think your assessments make sense! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CaNz Posted February 3, 2015 Share Posted February 3, 2015 You post 'em and I'll read 'em. Deal? I don't know a thing about how to make good poems, but I can give you a baseline for how your audiance may react. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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