Writing Shade of Moonlight <--title

[Kittie]

this is my V-dai tribute poem! :D

[color=crimson]In the silence
Of the night

The shadows play
With the drops of moon (light)

Illusions of Hope and Love
Lull the weak and innocent minded

Perfect for a feeding
Perfect for a Valentines Feast?

Before this night is over, my Love,
We shall taste upon their Lust

*Blood is sweeter
When the Love is stronger?*

*Love is stronger
When the mind is weaker?*

As we connect in a kiss
Empty thoughts fill my head

I can taste on the tip of your tongue
The sweetness of all things lost and gone

Blissful thoughts fill my head
As the blood drips from your lips

As a gentle breeze caresses my face
It softly whispers Happy Valentine?s Day?[/color]

:wave:

[Lia]

very nice!
i like the paragraph consistency:) keep up the good work!

[Raiha]

[COLOR=royalblue]I like it. It's got a sweet melodious ring to it. Something that sounds like a whispered song........:angel:[/COLOR]

[Kuja]

[SIZE=3][FONT=century gothic][COLOR=crimson]nice poem kittie... thou it makes me think vampires lol... oh wait what are these 2 teeth marks on my neck... have u been drinking my blood again?

anyway nice poem girl (just so yall know she writes a LOT of wonderful poems :)[/COLOR][/FONT][/SIZE]

[Dan L]

Very nice work, kittie ;) . Very original. Ummm.. I can't think of any criticism, so I'll leave it at that ;)

[asar]

The rhyme very unique, and i love the line "We shall taste upon their lust". very soft but filled with ominous images.....i love it.
Like a dark creature in an angels costumes.