RPG Raven: part one

[Raquel]

here it is...my first attempt at an interesting story...0.o'''...so...i hope i don't bore you...if ppl like it i'll wright a sequal

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raven slid out of the shadows scaring the slim redheaded girl standing at her locker.

"shiit! gezze raveie!!you scared the crap outta us!!" a short burnette was chalkish as she yelled at raven

"yeah," agreed the redhead "so are you coming to math today?"

"i guess..." raven shrugged doubtfully.

"oh i forgot to tell you...your creepo brother was looking for you...somthing about "familly business"..." catheren (the brunette) shuddered.

raver looked at her sharply "serric?"

"mmmhmm...he's so cute!!" the red head giggled

"oh god savannah!!! yuck!!" catheren gaged

the redhead (savannah) smirked. raven shook her head

" hey i'm gonna havta cancel that trip to algerbra...i'll see you guys lata..."

she turns and walks down the hall way. she left the building at a run.turning the coner she ducked behind a dumpster as the police went by... winceing at the smell she ran down the ally.ducking through a side door she rammed right into a large biker.

"hey!" he turned "what's a sweet armful like you doin back here?"

"none of your business!!" she snarled

"now now...diden't your mother teach you to mind your manners? no? well then we'll just have to beat some into you"

the man rolled up his sleeves then he and his friends advanced. raven smirked bearing fangs. she gave them a molment then lanched herself at the leader. twisting herself up and behind him she wrapped her arms around his thick neck in little effort she snapped it. cradleing the corpse she bit into his neck. the other bikers stared, horrified. she pulled back having drained the body. his blood painted her lips scarlet. she grinned showing her white fangs now stained with blood. the bikers looked from her to the body of their buddie cradled in her arms then turned and ran. raven laughed, a cold sarcastic sound. it echoed through the ally finally fadeing away. she stood in the silence listening for the sound of her heart. a foot step sounded behind her.

"it's not there...i know...i've listened long and hard... it's your fault that we're like this you know that don't you... you blame your self..."

"serric..."

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reads it... winces... that's pretty bad...oh well... first try...0.o

[Sere Tuscumbia]

Um . . . wouldn't this be in that improving yourself forum?

"The crack pours blood down on the unworthy,
And leaves them to face the darkness alone."
~!*Sere*!~

[Raquel]

finshed...now i'm done......0.o