Writing my poems

[Kittie]

[color=seagreen] i started a new thread because this is where all my non-related Chronicle work will go! hope that's akay! :D
if not...let me know...and blah blah... [/color]

[u][COLOR=tomato]Dangerous Butterfly[/COLOR] [/u]

[color=royalblue] While walking through the meadow one day
I stepped on a butterfly along the way

One wing, fluttered, stuck in my foot
The other stabbed the world in the eye

Blood spilled all over onto the Blades of grass
It slowly consumed the sun in a whole
?left my world in darkness?

When I pulled the demon out
The crimson poured forward
And gave me eyes anew

The creature flew away
Laughing as he did

I learned a lesson that day
When you see a butterfly-slowly-walk away

Innocence it has from afar
-But Know-
Nothing is as it seems?[/color]

:wave:

Poets's Questions/Comments:
"the part that it says stabbed the world in the eye...just describes my pain...
this is a true story...my sis had her butterfly clips on the floor and i stepped on one...i forgot i can bleed ---___---
so yeah...here's my poem!

Kittie Moon =^-^="

[Dan L]

*applause*

very good! very good! though I have to say, maybe a little abstract for me, but maybe it's cos I is a science man o.O... but still... very good!

[Kittie]

[color=crimson][u]?YtyinaS[/color] [/u]

[color=royalblue] Sanity can strike at any moment
When you see the painted clowns on the wall
Or perhaps when you hear the leg-less cricket noise
(in the afternoon)

Maybe the smooth edges of reality prick your finger
Only then can you taste the bitter-sweet
vanilla of life

You can view your sanity
Through a magnified-glass television
Then perhaps the picture won?t be quite so clear

Could be you question your sanity now (?)
Think it was madness after all...

Only time can tell
With the tick and the tock of
chocolate coffee
Is that not your cup of tea

Perhaps you should get a quieter
More softer clock
Would it help you get a greater amount of
insomniatic sleep

You can awake and have no answers
You can sleep and have all the answers

Only then will your madness be revealed to you...[/color]

[color=red]Poets's Questions/Comments:
"i know that insomniatic isn't a word..but it seemed to fit in for me...
i don't know where this poem came from either...off the top of me head...
don't be *too* cruel! =^-^="
[b] i hope i didn't post this before...[/b] [/color]

:wave:

[Guest AnTiPiG666]

Lets See where to begin,I got it.I'll Tell the one I wrote today In responce to my great depression....Love as I found there is no such thing|Depression my only struggle,one last pain|one hit lasts a lifetime|me,my death,on the timeline| this breath,the last one I take|this life, Wouldnt you say

? ................. MISTAKE.............?

By:Dwight Ponder