Kain Posted March 22, 2002 Share Posted March 22, 2002 This is mostly for my Rpg in GS.I kinda didn't make that good of a plot so here it is for everybody who signed up so far.By the way if anyone wants to join just go to it.Only 2 places left. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [FONT=arial]The day was bright as the sun could make it.But as one would think of the sun making the day bright it was actually the blows being traded from the winglies,humans,dragoons,and the viliage.The day was actually dark and foggy.This was a war for freedom from the winglies.The dragoons fought with the humans while the viliage who were created by the winglies fought with the winglies. Soon things begin to look hopeless.Dragoons were weakening with every inch they stepped....as were the Viliage.But neither side was going to lose.Winglies seemed to have the strength.But the Humans had learned to harness the power of dragons. Soon the humans were using dragons and Dragoons to win battles.Magic was being used from both sides.But as battle progressed so did the freedom of humans.The battles never died down.They were always fierce and full of death and despair. Both sides seemed to be winning but soon the winglies and the viliage seemed to begin to weaken.But they still did not give way. The battles still raged on for long periods of time.This war would be called "The Dragon Campaign". [/FONT] ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is where my rpg begins. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raiha Posted March 24, 2002 Share Posted March 24, 2002 [COLOR=royalblue]Raiha's Production Notes: .... Maxim of Writing #98: Longer is better.[/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kain Posted March 30, 2002 Author Share Posted March 30, 2002 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Raiha [/i] [B][COLOR=royalblue]Raiha's Production Notes: .... Maxim of Writing #98: Longer is better.[/COLOR] [/B][/QUOTE] I'm not the best at writing long things unless i'm really motivated to do so.But I guess I could try.....won't work though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raiha Posted April 3, 2002 Share Posted April 3, 2002 [COLOR=royalblue]Well, it was only a suggestion, you don't HAVE to make it longer. But it is nicer.[/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spikey Posted April 3, 2002 Share Posted April 3, 2002 [FONT=courier new]That's great. Although, you might want to put a little more story to it. It would make it more interesting.[/FONT] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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