Duo Maxwell Posted April 11, 2002 Share Posted April 11, 2002 Seeing this is the first time I've posted a poem here I'm kinda nervous, this came to me during a memorial assmbaly for a girl at my school.... but for some reason I was thinking about my b/f while writing this... and onto my poem What is it about you That makes me love you so? What is it about you That hurts my soul? What is it about you That keeps me awake at night? What is it about you That makes tears blur my sight? What is it about you, That has me in a spin? What is it about you, That makes this feel as if it?s a sin? What is it about you, That makes me feel safe and warm? What is it about you, That makes me feel torn? Whatever it is, I?d never want it to change. For it?s the thing I love most, And it should always stay the same. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pastbyer Posted April 11, 2002 Share Posted April 11, 2002 [color=indigo]Nice. It sounds great so far. Hope you'll update this.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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