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[coolmon]

This takes place in the kind-of distant future.
robots are now created, but take on many aspects of humans(feeling,looks,personality,all human-like)
Space ships are excellently like home, and can even regulate gravity.

However, many advanced scientists in robotics and their finest works are being kidnapped from aliens from a far away planet.

To play, choose whether your kidnapped or if you part of a search party. Also say if you are a human or a robot. Gems are form of money.

-Name
-Human/Robot(If robot, which kind?)
-Age(If available)
-Kidnapped/Search Party
-Bio
-Personality
-Planet you are currently on
-Items on you
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Name-Justin Zarupa
Robot(Electro Deep-Space Cyborg D)
Age-none
-Kidnapped
bio-searching for his creator, known simply as Prof. Mike.He crash landed on the planet, and when he woke up, he saw strange looking life forms carrying Mike away on a giant robot.
Personality-Has Brown hair and Brown eyes. Gets very angry and upset easily. usually nice.
Planet-Draizeel
Items-50 Gems, Small "Walker-Bot" in pellet form(Made by Mike)

Please Join!!!

[foreverinfinity]

All right, I'm not a moderator, and you might have been here longer than me, but I can tell that you really need more detail. the basic idea is good, but you should probably add:
1.for how long this has been going on
2.how they expect to find things
3.why it is so important to find them
4.what clues you have so far as to who kidnapped them and where they are being taken
5.ANY OTHER DETAILS that will explain more of the point of this rpg
If you Improve it, I might join. ;)

[Arcadia]

[size=1][color=darkslateblue]foreverinfinity, I'm glad that you're trying to help out, but in the future please leave this sort of thing to the mods. You can let us know about erring threads by pressing the exclamation point in the top right corner.

Coolmon, expanding upon what has been previously said, you do need to flesh out the background if you want to continue your RPG. All RPGs should be well-thought out and a general plot should be present. In your case, you might want to explain [i]why[/i] the scientists are being abducted by aliens and what the purpose of the story is - i.e., will you just be rescuing the scientists, or is there something deeper going on?

If you can flesh out the background story some more, as well as work on strengthening your own sign-up, that would be great. I suggest you read Harlequin's sticky at the top of the thread, and also OB's main rules, in case you haven't already. Both will help you out. If you have any more questions regarding the forum's rules, PM any one of the mods and we'll do our best to help you out.

Thanks,
Arcadia[/color][/size]