Writing The City

[Heaven's Cloud]

[color=indigo]Darkness floods the city. It is a darkness that prays on the weak, the solitary, and the careless. A crime syndicate of unequaled power and resources have taken control of every aspect of the city, both legal and illegal. Under the leadership of the crimelord known Carlos Rivers, aka the Bullfighter, the syndicate has almost unlimited resources and has uncontested power over the city.

Enter our hero. Perched upon a tall city building, he watches his enemies, as he has countless nights, just like this. But tonight is different tonight he will strike. The garage he is surveying is a known cocain warehouse. The cops refuse to raid it, afraid of inciting the wrath of the Bullfighter and his syndicate. But our hero is not afraid of the syndicate, and he is about to set into effect a chain reaction that will give his city their final chance for salvation.

He checks the time. Only twenty seconds now, ten, five...four...three...two...one.....

The explosion rocks the entire city block. The fire spreads quickly, and its roar is so loud that it almost covers the sounds of the screams of the workers trapped inside. The blaze spreads over the block, hungry, engulfing a small chinese restraunt and a small law office before the fire department is able to respond.

Our hero leaves his perched, a smile playing in the corner ofhis mouth...[/color]

TO be continued....

[Guest cloricus]

Really good - have you thought of putting that as the story to an rpg? (it beats dbz rpgs wich this place seems obsessed on? : )

[Flipmodesquad]

Very good try making it into a novel. maybe an RPG too
Its all good. It seems it could be a episode on cowboy beebop

[Raiha]

[COLOR=seagreen]Interesting enough, but could ja just fix the grammar in the first sentence? It's sort of a turn off if the first few words are incorrectly done.[/COLOR]