Mitch Posted May 8, 2002 Share Posted May 8, 2002 [color=red]Eye Soul Within everyone's eyes there is a story of the times within everyone's eyes you can see a glimpse of individuality an understanding of them deep down inside their minds within everyone's eyes you can see a sparkle of intuition from the core you can see the plagues paining the kindness shinning the eyes truly are a view into the soul and that view only seems to grow the longer you know someone and then grows to be so much more when you look into someone's eyes, it just seems so easy to emphasize view their mind in understanding declare but still yet not know enough to pursue a curiosity of their emotion try to understand their deep ocean our eyes are only an impression an impression of only a view of a mask the rest is hidden away until that mask is pierced then the real person is shown deep under that mask[/color] I suppose I should add my poems to a single post, but I feel that some more people will be attracted to my poetry if I post a title that maybe they will find interesting. I wrote this yesterday, when I was in a very pensive mood. So, comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Harlequin Posted May 9, 2002 Share Posted May 9, 2002 The words flow together very nicely. An excellent subject too, situations considered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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