Sere Tuscumbia Posted May 21, 2002 Share Posted May 21, 2002 Well, I wanna guess just how many people are going to read this after seeing that it really is me . . . um . . . 2. [I]Fire[/I] Fire Running through your veins Breathing into your soul Fulfilling the purpose Of thousands gone before It compares the blood of thousands To the blood of one Its love hast no mercy Its smile holds no love A cruel embrace Tearing at your heart You feel trapped Drowing in its presence Death *~*~~`` Please R&R . . . please? ~!*Sere & Co.*!~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Biida Posted May 21, 2002 Share Posted May 21, 2002 :D That was great. I really liked the flow to it, and the vividness and choice of words to it was perfect. Got any more? I'd love to read 'em. :) And you said you seem like a "kindergartener" compared to what I do... pft. :rolleyes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sui Generis Posted May 22, 2002 Share Posted May 22, 2002 *claps* Very nice! Thats awesome! See Britty I told you everyone on otaku is better than me at poetry! And this proves it!! ^^ Great poem Sere! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Biida Posted May 22, 2002 Share Posted May 22, 2002 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by DuoGod of Death [/i] [B] See Britty I told you everyone on otaku is better than me at poetry! And this proves it!! [/B][/QUOTE] *says nothing*....*thwaps him over the head with a stick for the fun of it, continuing to say nothing* *continues thwapping him* :shifty: Yes, Sere...more... you must post more.. ^_^ pwease? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sere Tuscumbia Posted May 26, 2002 Author Share Posted May 26, 2002 Sorry, depression and one hell of a writer's block . . . I'll post the more-than-interesting poem I wrote that signal the death of my writer's block . . . [I]Vampire[/I] Gentle words Gentle hands Sweet caresses Deep into the night Gentle kisses Breathing life Out of the heart Oblivion of the soul In one Simple gesture Reliving innocence Watching life Ripple away Like waves on a beach Then birth Of a demon One more terror Born from a child An angel of death Leading others down A path of anguish And never-ending torment When will it end? When will the souls Of the dead finally speak And rise up Against their master? Pain rules Heedless of the touch Of life Black wings against The white of the dawn Death comes too easily For those who wish To live . . . *~*~~`` I know . . . I know . . . it's really long but bear w/ me! ~!*Sere*!~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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