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[COLOR=green]if there is nothing there my cat will (for no reason) go
crazy. It could be the air or the floor
or somewhere only he can know but
we all think he's flipped again and sigh

but if there is (on the slight chance
that he's not psychotic)

something really there

he'll stalk it
(silent)
with his rear end up and his front

half down he creeps along like the lion he
thinks he is and not a house cat
pounces
looks around
thinking This is mine now

(suddenly i appear

he sees me,

and takes off like a cheetah)[/COLOR]

I wrote this poem for my English class. It is based on the poem "if there are any heavens" by E. E. Cummings. Not only did it earn me an A, it was also good enough to be printed in my school's "literary magazine."
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[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Raiha [/i]
[B][COLOR=seagreen]Stop bîtching! God, I told you what I think and if you don't like it, too bad! So pipe down or piss off.[/COLOR] [/B][/QUOTE]

Jesus.... could you be maybe the least bit considerate.... YOU need to pipe down or piss off....

It's a f-ing poem... not a question if you like cats or not... so don't post your BS about not liking cats.... Just reply to whether or not you like the poem... You need to change your attitude.... if not I'll change it for you...
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