Writing Stupid poem.

[Ben]

While thinking about the girl that I like, this poem formed in my head. I'm not much of a poem writer, but I do enjoy making people laugh, so here goes.

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
Sugar is sweet,
But you knew that, didn't you?

I wrote this poem,
Especially for you,
Writing quite slowly,
Going carefully through.

I know this poem is stupid,
And bound to make you smile,
And with that thought in mind,
I could write for a mile.

This poem is quite long,
And beginning to bore,
I'll make my point,
On the count of four.

One, two, three, four,
My counting is done,
When I'm with you,
I have a lot of fun.

I like you a lot,
Despite what I say,
I'll miss you a lot,
When I go away.

The girl will probably never receive the poem as I am incredibly shy in real life. :(

[Boba Fett]

9/10

Your girlfriend is very special to have someone like you Ben. You are[B]not[/B] shy, not towards me. Mabye it is because she is well, a she..........

[Sui Generis]

Lol.....Lets hope she is a she....


Very nice poem Ben....has greath rthym...Show it too her! Even if it means just slipping it to her right before you leave! She'll like it!

[Sara]

Hehe... I like it. ;)

Come on! What more praise do you need? :p

[Shy]

[color=green]I'm sure the praise of Ben's special someone would be much more appreciated than yours Cera. :whoops:

I like the poem, and I think you should tell the girl you like about your feelings for her. It is better to be honest in expressing your feelings towards people than to keep them bottled up inside. Take my word for it![/color]

[PrisonerOfHope]

Good poem, [b]Ben[/b].

I mean that... it's really good.

I think you should show her it.

-POH

[Sara]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Shyguy [/i]
[B][color=green]I'm sure the praise of Ben's special someone would be much more appreciated than yours Cera. :whoops:[/color] [/B][/QUOTE]::eyes him::

Watch it, buddy.

I love the first stanza...hehe. It's really sweet, Ben.

[Ben]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Shyguy [/i]
[B][color=green]I like the poem, and I think you should tell the girl you like about your feelings for her. It is better to be honest in expressing your feelings towards people than to keep them bottled up inside. Take my word for it![/color] [/B][/QUOTE]

I know Shyguy, I know. It's just harder for me. :cross:

[Guest Hikaru Ichijyo]

:) Nice Poem Ben, I've been in the same boat you have been in on many occassions, even still today, and I guess you should at least show this girl the poem and give her some hints! There is nothing worse in this world then doubt, it holds you back from accomplishing many goals in your life! I should really take my own advice. -__- Anyway good poem and show her the poem its about a 50/50 chance either way, and I'm sure you definitely don't want to end up like me! ;)

[Shy]

[color=green]:therock: And you think it isn't hard for me either? *points to OB name*[/color]

[Raiha]

[COLOR=seagreen]Adorable! Really, that's a very cute peice of writing. If I were you, I'd write it down, and hand it over to her, then run. ;)[/COLOR]

[Mist]

Ahhh, that's sweet. Show her. That;s how my b/f won me over. He's such a sweetie and I'm sure you are too, so I'm sure you'll have no problem getting her!

[Ben]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Shyguy [/i]
[B][color=green]:therock: And you think it isn't hard for me either? *points to OB name*[/color] [/B][/QUOTE]

That is actually faintly amusing.

[QUOTE][i] Originally posted by Raiha[/i]Adorable! Really, that's a very cute peice of writing. If I were you, I'd write it down, and hand it over to her, then run. [/QUOTE]

Slight problem there. When I gave her a birthday present I did that. *shudders* Took a while for me to smooth that out.

Thanks for all your support everyone, I'll see what happens during her last two days of school. (I'm done)