Writing Black and White

[Mist]

Here, to embarass myself again, is another "poem"...


Black and White

Turn your bright eyes

Up to the dark sky.

Walking in silence,

Destined to never ask why.

Wake up in the dawn

Fake yourself into thinking

Your brightness isn't gone

And that your stars are still twinkling.

Walk in the day

With your fake façade

Never let them know

You've lost your pride.

You just can't win,

In this game of pretend.

You needhelping hand,

that they just can't send.

Your hopes, your dreams,

Are carried away with the wind.

Black is the nothing

That swallows you whole.

White is the everything

You just can't control.

Turn your bright eyes,

Wake up in the dawn.

Fake yourself into thinking

The happiness isn't gone.

Walk in the day.

You just can't win.

Is it so wrong

To be sad again?

Black is nothing

Like the dead of the night.

Life isn't colored,

It's black and white.
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OOC: I feel so dumb....

[The Unholy Newt]

That is not dumb, that is really, really good :)

[Sui Generis]

wow...Very good...

[Mist]

Thanks, but I wasn't really impressed by it. I just thought it would be okay to post it...

[Raiha]

[COLOR=seagreen]That was very nice, and btw, you spelled "embarass" wrong. ;) But don't worry, it's not that important.[/COLOR]

[Dragon Warrior]

I like. *claps* Very good stuff. You have a gift. A born poet, yes.