Guest tragicmagic Posted June 28, 2002 Share Posted June 28, 2002 Down by the moments pulse, Hurt by one's words so false, Saddened by the days results, Angered by my own qualities and own faults, I'm shattered. Trying to regain all that I had, But realizing all that I had was bad, This is how I live from day to day, Shattered. Not quite sure what the Hell to say, Whatever you do right now isn't the time to walk in my way, That's just too bad for me, Blinded by what I cannot see, Too many times did I fall, And this thing people call life, Chose to ruin it all. With my head hanging down, I'm not sure what curse I have found, But whatever it is, I wish it was his. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boo Posted July 3, 2002 Share Posted July 3, 2002 :cool: Nice. But couldnt you do some more with rime? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vegeta rocker Posted July 3, 2002 Share Posted July 3, 2002 nice. its fine without rhyme but it isnt a bad idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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