Boo Posted July 6, 2002 Share Posted July 6, 2002 [size=1]-Deleted the poem from my life. It was too sad.-[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinobi Posted July 6, 2002 Share Posted July 6, 2002 Ah yes, Well, im scared now! lol j/k it pretty good although your grammar is wrong, you said: I didn't had friends it should be: I didn't [B]Have[/B] friends if you fixed that, pretty good *thumbs up* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mist Posted July 6, 2002 Share Posted July 6, 2002 [color=red][size=1]And that's coming from the guy who spoke/typed in all capitals...:rolleyes: It's good; (but not the greatest mind you.)Very nice concept. If you worked a bit more on it, it would be very well done.[/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boo Posted July 6, 2002 Author Share Posted July 6, 2002 BTW: this was based on the Quote in my siggy :D I just made a poem on it :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mist Posted July 6, 2002 Share Posted July 6, 2002 [color=red][size=1]:therock: Oh yeah, I remember seeing it...[/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juu Posted July 6, 2002 Share Posted July 6, 2002 Great poem!! erm... sorta confusing.. but still great!! It makes u sorta sad..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boo Posted July 6, 2002 Author Share Posted July 6, 2002 Thanks for the compliment. (both of them :D) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vegeta rocker Posted July 6, 2002 Share Posted July 6, 2002 I like poems that are slightly unorganized in the fact that i find them more intense in emotion that way. I like it very much, the part about twisted feelings reminds me of one of mine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boo Posted August 6, 2002 Author Share Posted August 6, 2002 Gee thanks! (deletes vegeta rocker out of sheeps killing list) He wont attack you anymore ;) J/K Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jupitersun Posted August 10, 2002 Share Posted August 10, 2002 it pretty good:) but it kinda makes you think.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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