Avalon Posted July 7, 2002 Share Posted July 7, 2002 While looking through my desk, I happen to stumble on poems that I wrote long ago. I had put them on the Internet but then someone began to take my poems and put their name on them so I took them off. Hope you like it... When I said I loved you, It was a lie. Lust is what I felt inside. I'm still wondering what love is, This couldn't have been it, it wasn't all bliss. We definitely wouldn't be good together; The two of us mixing was like bad weather. You were snow, and I was the sun. The task of staying together could never be done. If I say this over and over, maybe I'll believe. I'll get out of this okay, if I can deceive me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mist Posted July 7, 2002 Share Posted July 7, 2002 [color=red][size=1]Wow, Panny Chan, this really good! You should put this on Otakupoetry.com![/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Avalon Posted July 7, 2002 Author Share Posted July 7, 2002 Thanks! Maybe I'll do that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mist Posted July 8, 2002 Share Posted July 8, 2002 [color=red][size=1] If you want to see moi, I'm Evelyn Thompson. Anyway, post some more of your poetry soon! I forgot to put a rating. Rating: 8.5/10[/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boo Posted July 8, 2002 Share Posted July 8, 2002 He really is good. 8.6/10 (allways have to give more than Misty :D) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Chicken Posted July 8, 2002 Share Posted July 8, 2002 Pretty damn good, I guess I like it as I can relate to it, good stuff 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mist Posted July 9, 2002 Share Posted July 9, 2002 [color=red][size=1][QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Dark_Apocalyps [/i] [B]He really is good. 8.6/10 (allways have to give more than Misty :D) [/B][/QUOTE] If we ever meet in real person, D_A, I'm going to kill you. Literally. :flaming: As for my rating, I think it was a good one, so meh!:p[/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boo Posted July 9, 2002 Share Posted July 9, 2002 :D depents on where you live or going on vacation :D els im coming after you!:devil: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Posted July 10, 2002 Share Posted July 10, 2002 8.7/10 ide give 8.8, but i wanted to only out-do by one... :shifty: .... haha u two fight all u want i out did y'all panny ..good i like...its a good short but utterly powerfull blend of insightfullness and i like alot.. well my true rating is 9/10 :-D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mist Posted July 10, 2002 Share Posted July 10, 2002 [color=red][size=1] Phantom,( : ) 1) We [b]weren't[/b] fighting. (It's an inside joke between mainly D_A, Juuthena, and I.) ...and... 2) Even if we [b]were[/b] fighting, we wouldn't be fighting about out-doing each other. We'd be fighting about him calling me Misty...*shivers* But it's all good because you didn't know! :D[/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corey Posted July 11, 2002 Share Posted July 11, 2002 ::Cough, Cough, Hack:: 8.8/10 ::Cough, Cough:: Really good poem. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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