Writing Love's Game

[Flipmodesquad]

As i put the vegatables into the bag. I looked at the clock wondering what time it was.
I kept looking at the clock to know when it was time to get off of work
When it was finally time to leave I went towards the back room to gather my stuff.
When I went through the door I was looking to see if anyonelse was there.
Then I saw her.
I am always been nervous when I see her.
I thought to my self this time I wont be afraid
so I went up to her and I finally summoned enough courage to say "Hi britany"
I felt as chilled as a polar bear when I said that
I awaited her response I felt as if I was on trial and giulty on all charges
then she said
"Hey I know you, your name is Joe right?"
I stuttered a little and said "um um ye yea yeah"
"So how have you been?"
"oh i'm fine I've just been, well around here."
"Oh well take care i have to go maybe our conversation could be longer next time."
"um ok."
"well take care ok, bye, cya tommorow"
"um bye" Man i felt like a dumbass when I said that
A minute after she left I picked my stuff and locked up the store. When I got home I felt tired as hell.
I rested myself on the bed and before I knew it I fell asleep. The next morning while i was getting
ready for work i kept thinking what i would say to her this time. The thought of talking to her was
tuanting me like a ghost. When I got to work I did my daily routine. I waited impatiently to talk to her
at the end of the day. Every waking moment was like being tortured. When the time finally came
my impatient feeling faded, and then my nervousness just kicked in.
"Oh hi Joe so we meet again"
Man every word she said even sounded sexy. I felt too nervous to say anything.
"So how was your day today? Well while we're around the subject my day was terrible there was this
guy who was older than me or you and he was hitting on me. I was like excuse me im not an object im a person.
So how about, what did you do today?"
I felt speechless. I didn't know what to say at all except "Nothing".God what was I thinking. Ok stay calm
Joe your doing ok anything you say can't hurt you. Oh god what am i thinking. I started to feel tired. I started to feel kinda whoozy
Then before i knew it i had fainted. I knew i had fainted becuase right before i woke up i heard someone calling my name.
When i woke up i saw britany saying"oh my god Joe are you all right?"
I responded with a light and weakend"yeah"
I had brang myself back up
"geeze you took quite a fall joe"
Then the weirdest thing happened.I had suddenly said "Britany would you go out with me?"
"Yeah sure Joe heh the funny thing about this is actually i kinda liked you from the start funny thing eh?"
Then I fainted again from the shock of hearing that answer. When I woke up again i was in my bed. Then I had thought to myself
It was all a dream. When I started walking upstairs. When I got into the living room I only seen my little brothers and sisters.
I asked one of them"Hey where's mom and dad?"
"Oh Joe you fainted Haha. Well mom and dad are talking to a girl and Derek in kitchen. They brought you in here. Were you sleeping in the car?"
"NO i wasnt something just happened so dont worry."
As i walked towards the kitchen I said"Hi" to everyone and sat down folding my hands on my lap.
"Well Joe, Britany tells me you fainted right after work. You guys were talking in the back room then you started to faint."
"Hey stop telling the boy what happened I don't think he wantd to remember right now."
Thanks dad I didn't want to remember what happened back there i wished i had died instead of fainting.
"Hey Joe can i talk to you for a sec?"
"Yeah sure Derek"
What did he want to talk about who knows?
(whispers) "Yo man you asked Britany out didn't you?"
"I think so, did I?"
"You did:smirk: she told me while we were bringing you home."
"Hey how did you know i was at work?"
"Well you said you were gonna meet me at the park after work but you never showed up. Anyways your mom got worried and she told me to go get you so I went."
Well that was a great thought. Me fainting, My mom telling my best friend to pick me up, My best friend does pick me up(litteraly)
and the girl of my dreams sees me faint get picked up by a guy and my house? I don't think im in luck with her.
(continued in later moments)

[Mist]

[color=red][size=1] Um...it's different...yeah...that's it...different...[/color][/size]

[Flipmodesquad]

lol well lol i didnt qiute perfected it yet lol im going to write a second part but i think i should proof read it next time lol.

[Shinkoru]

I like it.. its diffrent but.. cute, kinda.. i dunno but.. i like it.. :)

[Flipmodesquad]

THANKS IT IS KINDA DIFFERENT ISNT IT? LOL Well people keep telling me what you think?