Phantom Posted July 18, 2002 Share Posted July 18, 2002 [color=sienna][b]Transcribed clash of uncertainties:[/b] Welcoming the grasp of inner beauty, my mind stirs, Handling this new obsession with a grand asphyxiation, Probe the fears, denoting my trust, my faith? Ascend the scaling range of mountainous atrocities, Begging for the pain to end, this procession virtue will conclude, Designate the finish, promoting my release, my grace? Depriving me of the love I entail, the necessitate I grow, Requesting this wait set sail, liberate, to discharge, Slow the end, accelerating my lust, driving my hate? With the cumbersome hatred lifted, my mind stirs, Handling this age old passion by means of appreciation, Query the qualms, symbolizing my conviction, as of late? How do you welcome what is already present? Can you handle fixation-rich prodding still? Investigate the doubts? Do you trust? Do you still have faith? Trying to understand the life questions, my mind rouses, Unsure of the future, my psyche takes on this task, I strobe for answers, ensuring my survival, my place? Welcoming the grasp of inner beauty, my mind stirs, Handling this new obsession with a grand asphyxiation, Probe the fears, denoting my trust, my faith? M Hunter[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Harlequin Posted July 18, 2002 Share Posted July 18, 2002 [font=gothic][color=crimson]Excellent as usual Phantom. You really have a way with words. My question is this; how does "strobe for answers" work?[/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Posted July 18, 2002 Author Share Posted July 18, 2002 How does a strobe light work? The way I meant that was that the answers are never clear and complete.. the truth and meaning to the answer would never show itself in a 'straightforward' demeanor. Never constantly splaying an exact area with the true light.... which denotes my relationship with Danielle... she rarely (like most girls hehe) gives me straight answeres, without me having to bug... Explained? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Harlequin Posted July 18, 2002 Share Posted July 18, 2002 [font=gothic][color=crimson]Ah. Grammatically though, that's still a litte weird. Thanks for the explanation though. The only word I could think of was strive... And yeah, I understand the "most girls" comment. You should meet Raven. Strangest person I know, asiding myself. But then, we've both had problems, so we expected it in each other. Hell, we like it.[/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinkoru Posted July 18, 2002 Share Posted July 18, 2002 I love the poem, espaclly knowing i was their when it was written. :D LOVE YOU. AND IM NOT THAT HARD TO FIGURE OUT!! ..or am i?.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Posted July 18, 2002 Author Share Posted July 18, 2002 *pats your back gently* ....well.. lol.. Naw, its just that we are both quite delirious individuals, besides, who wants to be normal and easy to understand... y'all agree Harly? hehe...Thnx for the praise, can always use an ego boost... hehe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Harlequin Posted July 18, 2002 Share Posted July 18, 2002 [font=gothic][color=crimson]I wasn't saying it was good to boost your ego Phantom. I agree fervently. And what's even more fun than delirious is full on deranged. A.k.a. Raven and I, or perhap conversation between Jesus Chicken, I and a friend of ours. They're those conversations you just know where messed up, but you can't remember a word of them... But yeah, your poetry is excellent. Some of the better stuff I've ever read actually. You could quite easily publish a book with some of your pieces you know.[/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Posted July 18, 2002 Author Share Posted July 18, 2002 What is it with people here.. Everyone is seriously too nice... hehe... thanks man... i dont write though.. im not good at it....writing is my fun stuff..stuff i do in my spare time.... Maybe you should start a thread... you are quite the linguist yourself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Harlequin Posted July 18, 2002 Share Posted July 18, 2002 [font=gothic][color=crimson]What is with you? You are way too modest! You are a great writer, don't give me that "I'm not too good at it" crap. You ask anybody here. Trust me, that's damn good stuff. I'll start a thread next time I get around to writing something... [/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boo Posted July 18, 2002 Share Posted July 18, 2002 Excellent work! LOL Great job! Keep it > ehhh < ehhhh ^ ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Posted July 18, 2002 Author Share Posted July 18, 2002 *Smiles* Aye but I did not claim that I 'suck' at it, merely explaining that I am not all that good, and that people like you who so obviously possess much superior skills than I, can come out and say that I am better than them... *sighs contently* .. There is no winning this wittless battle of modesty... or lack there of? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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