Writing Fearful School - Free Verse

[Nomad]

ok my first free verse was 'hard times' (see hard times thread) and here's my second one. I don't like this one like I like the other one. this one was also for a school project. (school :demon: )



Fearful School

School - a place to learn.
Learn to be afraid,
about values,
the meaning of friendship,
or to learn how to get going in life.

For some, being frightened is the key,
school shootings,
stabbings,
bullies,
school lunch food.

For others, the counsellor's office is home.
Old unfaithful relationships.
Unfaithful relationships?
Yeah right,
more like he/she likes her/him.
More or less......
A crush.

School is completely horrible,
for certain people that is.
Regular counselor visits,
nurse visits,
and fear of violence.

For others,
another day out of their lives,
an exciting experience,
or an boring waste of time.

[Phantom]

Good, Like your work, maybe instead of creating so many threads, make 1 and keep posting your free verse poems in it? also allowing others to do the same? .. just a sugestion..

This poem denotes those same school ideas over and over... you dont like school much? the way you write, you put more effort into the bad parts.. .well who 'loves' school? hehe not me.. but i cant say i dlislike.... Well im finaly DONE school for good hehe.. so here we are.. good peom... a simple yet satisfying description of school as it should be.

[Nomad]

yeah *thinks to himself* I will make one thread for my poems starting with the next one. I'm just going into 9th grade (High school where I live, unlike other places).

School? Whaz dat?:drunk: