Writing The Right Stuff...

[Mnemolth]

...and now for a little fun with just an ounce of opprobrium. ;)

A rose by any other name
would smell just as sweet
but if its all the same
with you, I do believe,
Mnemolth stinks like sh*t.

The sword has been drawn, who shall step forward and take up the challenge? :devil:

The rules are quite simple and straightforward.

1. You are to write about another member of OB. Now I've started with myself, cos..well...cos I wanted to start things off on a light note. You can get heavy if you want. Just remember to remain good-humoured. ;)

2. But it MUST be an insight into the other person (of course it can be completely wrong, it just needs to be your opinion at the time of writing).

3. Insults and praises are both accepted as long as they're done with good humour, and great wit, and NO malice. Please note, however, the person you're commenting on may be sensitive and so you may need to adjust your contribution accordingly. (For me personally, you can say anything and everything. I promise not to be offended, as long as its intelligent and witty, or simply hilarious, but you have to stick with the format, see below).

4. You can submit more than one contribution and/or you can post about more than one person, and you can reply to contributions. However, ANY post on this thread MUST be poetic in nature (it need not rhyme but it still has to be a poem), with a MINIMUM of four lines.

If you have any questions, PM me, do not post it here.

You can explain your poem in your post if you'd like. You can adapt a famous poem, you can even copy an APPROPRIATE passage if you want, just as long its poetic in nature, intelligent and witty.

So...whose got the right stuff? ;)

[Boo]

Mist oh mist,
ur mostly pissed,
when someone calles you misty
it wont be easy
to escape from you
and the things you do (slamming rods of course)
Now I better run
cause i did things i shouldnt have done.

Like it? :D

[Mnemolth]

Your rhyme is most amusing,
the words are most pleasing
'till someone comes a'Misting
and severs you from the land of the living!

;)

[Mist]

[color=red][size=1]Hmmmm....interesting...


D_A, D_A,
what is there to say?
You better shut your mouth
when talking about a girl from the South.

And should you futher bother me,
I'll be sure to make sure that you see,
That not only am I your friend,
I'm your worst enemy![/color][/size]

[Corey]

One of the niced people,
I have ever met.
You lend your shoulder to cry on,
It will soon be wet.

Calm and comforting,
You always get the gist .
The most caring person ever,
My sweetest Mist.

[Mist]

[color=red][size=1] Dang you, Corey! If you don't stop, you're going to turn me all googly-eyed...*smiles*

He thinks that I'm caring,
and it's stupid;
he even thinks I'm nice,
but I suppose the time will come,
when I give DOK some better advice.

He's nicer than I could ever be,
and is reading me all wrong.
He barely even knows me;
seeing as I haven't known him long.

Although from what I can tell,
he never likes to fight.
It's nice to talk to him,
except he's always right. (T.T)

He's compassionate, yet not weak,
and I wander some day,if I really knew him,
would he be a friend that I would seek?

So I wander through the day...

...What is he like?[/color][/size]

[vegeta rocker]

the sky fell from above
and screamed at the ground
much as would your favorite
j rock would sound

as artistic and unique as
a black pearl
you are diffrent yet own
this world

you are proud and
with you we delight
you are our own
freak satellite

try and guess, was kinda hard cuz dont actually know him so.......

[Mist]

[color=red][size=1] That describes a lot of people here. You're going to have to specify.[/color][/size]

[vegeta rocker]

ooooookkk i specify ummmm but this is fun so perhaps another clue?
Actually theres a clue in the last part that i think some j rock fans would get though,well theres a clue right there i said he.
mmmmmm a fun clue.....when you insult someone you say, did i hit a -----? you might get it now.

[Corey]

It's Transistic, isn't it?

[vegeta rocker]

yup ya got me! Shhhhhh! Don't tell! It will be like, excuse me your poem sucks you are no banned. It was kind of hard cuz i don't really know the guy, but hey it was fun! And i think his name Transtic not Transistic Nerve.

[Mist]

[color=crimson][size=1][QUOTE][i]Originally posted by vegeta rocker [/i]
[B]Transtic not Transistic Nerve. [/B][/QUOTE]

:therock: You knew what he meant.

But, yeah, I can see it being about TN.[/color][/size]

[vegeta rocker]

Yeah i did know what he meant i just watch too many court shows....ahhhhh the years of misspent youth.
once you reach double digits your way past your prime.:p