Writing Chosen Life(poem)

[Mitch]

Wow, I haven't posted any poems here for a LONG time. I've been really busy this summer.
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Chosen Life
Life is such a constant endeavor
it just keeps going on forever
and we all walk along this path
bear the displeasing stress
have our moments of caress
we all walk this path our own ways
follow our destinies in a hectic haze
and as we grow older
the world seems to become colder
we begin to see the true meaning of life
see it not as an endeavor
but an enjoyable experience
that we can express forever
keep inside our souls
and except the life that we chose[/color]

Comments?

[Corey]

I love it.

It's great tale of how life really is.
[b]8/10[/b]

I also like the one in your sig.

[Phantom]

The older and world colder, Is that how YOU actually see it? If so i am so sorry, cuz there is a lot of life to live hehe, and i sorta hope it gets more cozy and free... *smiles* good poem though. 8/10

[Mitch]

LOL!I was momentarily confused because you and DarkOrderKnight have the same avatar.

[Krademon]

Well I'm fifteed and it's about 4degrees. Maybee thats cause it winter.
Nice poem, I'd give it 8\10.
It's got a truthful ring to it though. We've been doing life metaphors in class so here's on.

Life is a bookshelf.
There's always something you haven't read.

Kinda sad but true. I think I'm defeating the mood of this thread soooo.

Life is like a strawberry
It tastes nice.:p