Juu Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 OOC: ^_^' okay, here's a small poem I wrote. *sigh* most of my poems all come to me when I get bored..... *shrugs* --------------------------- My love for you, has always been true. Since the day I met you. From the touch of your lips, to the tips of your fingertips. The day we first kissed, I'll always miss. Although I'm away, My heart will stay. Baby, I'll love you forever, Forever Love, Forever Love........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 Awe, that is soooooo romantic :-D soo soo this is based on a real dude eh? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juu Posted July 23, 2002 Author Share Posted July 23, 2002 :blush: Umm.... Maybe.... ^^ (thinks) exactly how do these people know???? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 hey, i know im dumb..no need for sarcasm :twitch: lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corey Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 Sweet and beautiful. I really like it. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mnemolth Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by DarkOrderKnight [/i] [B]Sweet and beautiful. I really like it. 8/10 [/B][/QUOTE] Is it just my imagination or do you give everyone 8/10? ;) High enough not to be an insult and low enough not to be praise?? *wicked smile* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juu Posted July 23, 2002 Author Share Posted July 23, 2002 LOL, anyway.... that was my first 'love' poem, so it might be a bit fuzzy-ish... and btw.. john, I wasn't being sarcastic....lol ^_^' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mist Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 [color=red][size=1] Juu, that's not John. That's Mike, my older [b]borhah[/b]! :D Nice, Juu! Great job! I like the short stanzas, and the choice of words was decent, but the emotion is what saved you from a really bad rating. :toothy: 7.5/10[/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Harlequin Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 [font=gothic][color=crimson]I swear, the entire boards are so overly quixotic its beyond remotely amusing. Reminds me of a song I heard once I think. Something about Forever Love. Oh well. Nice poem. A little more despcription would have helped, the words were overly simple, but not much else.[/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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