Lady Asphyxia Posted August 2, 2002 Share Posted August 2, 2002 Okay well, Anade, My muse, started to nag me, and who am I to deny her? This is the product. ADDICT What I want is to live, What I'll get is to die. What I need is happiness, What I have - a lie. The needle, my arm. They go hand in hand. And they take me, soaring, To a brilliant land. Where happiness rules, and agony fades. Where day is like night, and night, day. Addiction A word we all hate to use But all I do to my body is just that; abuse. I'll fall down off the plain, And my conscience will whine So I promise myself Thats the last time. A day or two, and I can't stand the pain. So I'll go back to Ms. Heroine again. All I what is to live, All I'll get is to die. What I need is happiness What I have - a lie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ~Mystic~ Posted August 2, 2002 Share Posted August 2, 2002 Thats an awsome poem and Its really well written. I wish I could write like that. Its one of those things that makes you think, ya know?. Hope your muse keeps nagging you because you are a terrific and very talented writter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady Asphyxia Posted August 3, 2002 Author Share Posted August 3, 2002 Yeah, thanks. Unfortunately, Anade will settle down for a while and leave me to write stories, so there'll probably be no more poems for a while... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarkM Posted August 3, 2002 Share Posted August 3, 2002 Thats a good poem :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boo Posted August 4, 2002 Share Posted August 4, 2002 Pretty good poem. Post more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Chicken Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 Damn that's good. Nice and depressing... Well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mitch Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 [color=red]Very nicely worded...it's really nice. [b]All I what is to live, All I'll get is to die. What I need is happiness What I have - a lie.[/b] this line is what really made the poem a good poem. Keep writing![/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady Asphyxia Posted August 6, 2002 Author Share Posted August 6, 2002 Thanks. Actually, I only wrote the poem because I had the lines "All I want etc" in my head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jupitersun Posted August 10, 2002 Share Posted August 10, 2002 that a great poem i agree with anime lover those lines are the ones that made it a good poem, but withg everythign else its great^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liamc2 Posted August 10, 2002 Share Posted August 10, 2002 *cries* ooo I'm so proud! Meh little baby is all grown up! lol, I know for sure I'm going to be hunted down at school on monday for that ----- But seriously now, it is marvellously well written. Mind you I'm not much of a judge on writing poetry as I've detested doing it ever since it was mandatory at primary school. . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Empathy Posted August 11, 2002 Share Posted August 11, 2002 I like tht 'un ^_^ keep at it man!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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