Boo Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 Days have passed. I sit here in sorrow. These words will be my last. thats why im wishing for tomorrow. I hate this life with anything in it. yelling at me and everything like that. Its been like that since im a kid. Just me, who ever liked the little brat? Who cares about me? They wont care if I die! Im older and smarter now you see? Ive figgured out that all was just a lie! Everything you told! Now I sit here in sorrow. In the cold, Praying for tomorrow. Whatya think? (just thought up about it while i was posting this :D) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mitch Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 [color=red]It's free verse then since you just thought it up right?? I like it, wish I could think up poems really fast, but it always takes me 15+ mins. to write a really good poem. Keep writing.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mist Posted August 5, 2002 Share Posted August 5, 2002 [color=crimson][size=1] Very nice poem, D_A. My only criticism would be about how there was no stanzas, and correct puncutuation. But no matter, good job all the same. ^___^[/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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