Writing Among Us

[Corey]

I wrote this last year during school. I will post it a few chapters at a time. This is also a four part work. As of now I only have this first part written.

[b]To Read Before Reading[/b]
Dear Reader,
It is not my intent to offend you by writing this. If you are offended I am deeply sorry. This is a work of fiction and is in no way true. I have put a lot of work into this. Also, please do not judge me by what I have writen. I [b]am[/b] 15 and have a higly actie imagination. I am in no way disturbed nor savagely violent. To the people of Otakuboards.com, you are some of the first to see this. Any feedback would be apreciated. Enjoy.
-Corey Roos

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[b]Prolouge[/b]
June 7th, 1906
"A middle aged man was found slashed to death in his bedroom yesterday. The man, whose name athorities are not releasing as of yet, apparently was the victim of a satanic cult. All over his body the number 666 was carved into his skin. Doctors believe he did not die of the mutilation, but of blood loss. Both of his wrists and his neck were slit. He was hung upsidedown from the cieling of his room. The murderers are still at large."
-Exerpt from a radio broadcast

June 8th, 2006
"The murderer that has claimed the lives of over ten people is still missing tonight. This man is especially dangerous because of the manner in which he killshis victims. We would like to warn you that the video and dialouge you are about to hear is very graphic. Younger or sensitive viewers please be advised..."
-Portion from a T.V. newcast

June 12th, 2106
The high senate of United earth is saddened today. Durrng the ceremony to welcome the new president to his position, a masked man walked into the chamber and with a large steel pipe, imploded the presidents head. the man also killed most of the people at the ceremony. All of them were hung from the two-hundred foot cieling by chainlink ropes. The athorities have found no DNA evidence but they do have vauge camera shots of an armor clad figure. Vice President Chad is scheduled to take the chair on Monday.
-Ocular Straming Transmission Segment

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[b]Chapter I[/b]
June 5th, 2506 2:30 pm
"Make it stop! He's getting stronger! I can feel him! Get out of my head!!"
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"He's been screaming like that for over a week... I'm starting to get worried Doctor Braun. He may kill himself if he contiues." The nurse and doctor looked in on the patient in the holding room. "It seems he is completely unaware he is in a Zero-G cell. I'm sure that if there was gravity he could be running into the walls."
"Perhaps..." The doctor said, not paying attention at all. "Can I see his chart?"
"Of course doctor, just a second." The nurse typed command into the console on the wall.
"Patient 697-6245-6875. Charles Kain. Age thirty. Suffers from skitzophrenia, acute dimentia, and..." The doctor stiffened a little. "And is a murderer. It says here that he believes his split personality is the devil?"
"Yes... To be honest, I have taken special interest in his case." She blushed slightly as the doctor looked at her. The color creeped into her face and lit it up. "It has kind of been a hobby. He has told many phychiatrists that when he killed those people he was given suggestions to do it by the devil. Satan if you will."
"How terrible. Someone still believes is such a thing as the devil in this day and age. Can he be sedated?"
"No doctor. He is already at his maximum dose."
"Maximum dose and still like this?" The doctors brow furrowed as they looked in on the man. His white long hair flowed around him in the Zero-G room. The doctor shook his head. "All of our advanced technology and yet the biggest mystery is still our own minds." The both walked down the hall to the courus of screams echoing from room 610.

[White Digivise]

Personally, i like it so far. it sounds like it is defintely going to get interesting. Can't wait for the next entry!

[Corey]

[b]Chapter II[/b]
June 5th, 2506 - 11:50 P.M.
"You don't want to be here now."
"Why is that Charles?"
"Because," I looked up at the green digital clock on the wall, "in about ten minutes you will die."
"Will you kill me Charles?" The doctor asked, eyeing the camera bubble taping in the upper corner, cautiously. The red light was on.
"Yes and no. It will be me but not my conciousness." I said in a trembling voice. "I don't want to kill anyone." tears streamed down my face. "It's not my fault!"
"Calm down, calm down. Charles, I'm here to help you. I'm your new phychiatrist. My name is Doctor Topper. How will you kill me when you are strapped to that chair with titanium straps?" Crying, I spoke almost inaudibly.
"I don't know..." I glanced at the clock. My face went placid. "Three minutes left doc," I chuckled grimly, "better leave now. I can feel him. He's starting to surface."
"Help me understand Charles. Two hours ago you were screaming and yelling. You seemed to be going," the doctor cleared his throat, "crazy. Why are you so composed now?" My face was void of all emotion.
"Have you ever heard of the calm before the storm? Thirty seconds before he starts to come out. Are you ready to die doc?" A thin, evil smile on my lips sent a shiver through him.
"Then we will wait." The seconds ticked by. Twenty. Fifteen. Ten. I started laughing demonically. Five. Four. Three. Two. One. The doctor looked from the clock to my face. He stumbled out of the chair and sat down hard. His heart throbbed in his chest. My eyes were rolled into the back of my head. Streams of blood rushed from behind the white orbs. He looked up at the camera to scream for help. A small squeak escaped him. The red light was off. He turned back to me and stared. In a deep, bass toned voice I began to speak,
"On the sixth day of the sixth month of the sixth year, the angel of death emerges. He shall bring a sheet of death and pestilance over the land and ring in the new age of Satan..."
"Charles?"
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Sorry, I don't have that much time tonight. Only one chapter.