Talon Posted August 9, 2002 Share Posted August 9, 2002 [COLOR=teal]Something I wrote when Ami died.....I miss her still, but Jaimie's my lover, and damnit, I'll keep it that way if I have to kill myself to do it! [i][font=times new roman][size=2]Can you feel it? Can you feel this, The shadow of hatred, The pain of loss? Do you see this, The fires that burn, That burn in my mind? Can you feel the rage? My heart rushes, Though it's been Long shattered. It hurts too much. My sword has shattered, My shield's been pierced through, And my armor.... Merely cloth...without her. Every night I wake, Wake to nothingness, Nothingness that echoes, Echoes in the shadow. Her blood touched my lips, From hers, my heart broke. She's gone too soon, I vow this vow. None shall love me, None shall I love. My heart, solid steel. My mind, crystal-clear. Someone save me! Save me from the echoes, The echoes of her screams! Save me from the shadows of reality.....[/i][/font][/size][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boo Posted August 9, 2002 Share Posted August 9, 2002 .................that was just [size=4]GREAT[/size]! Man! That really really was fantastic! *falls down over emotions* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mitch Posted August 9, 2002 Share Posted August 9, 2002 [color=red]Good job yet again. Keep writing![/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jupitersun Posted August 10, 2002 Share Posted August 10, 2002 I really loved this one. Very touching (tear). lol Angel's cuz brandy that was a great poem. it's sad in a way. I would love to here more of your work:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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