Phantom Posted August 11, 2002 Share Posted August 11, 2002 [color=red]They stir, dwelling in the warmth, the weakness, the cultivated lust of pain, Intertwined into the abyss of beauty, the fane, the grave disgust...it ruins the suggested life...love, The anger, the distraught frustration, subdued only by the egotistical presence of Pollock. Strange visions of utter chaos, no, not the kind you see in movies, but the nailing of the cross into the pledged crucifix, brings a smile to the underdeveloped brain of a Halfling, and a grimace to the petrified iris' of the saddened monk, Do not refrain from this passion, enlighten the darkness, severe the bright links, implode the infrastructure of Aton, deny the life its chance to be suggested...let the hate take control... bring the odius outrage into the quelm of loathing... >>>Phantom[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corey Posted August 11, 2002 Share Posted August 11, 2002 Whoa... That just blew my mind, man... That was just awesome... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Harlequin Posted August 11, 2002 Share Posted August 11, 2002 [font=gothic][color=crimson]Amazing as always Mike. I love your work. No, really, I do.[/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Posted August 11, 2002 Author Share Posted August 11, 2002 Thanks...even used red for once.. needed to splay my minds feelings out... that one... instead of using a thesaurus and giving u the most heavily wacked words.. i said my feelings... wasnt feelin too good heh...but thnx Flynn, your praise is of the highest value to me. >>>Phantom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mitch Posted August 11, 2002 Share Posted August 11, 2002 [color=red]Again, good choice of words. I like the feeling I get of it being just raw emotion. Keep up the good work Phantom![/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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