Writing Crystal Fighter's

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OK people this is my first story I have ever done by myself. I don't know if you guys have heard about Crystal Fighter's or not. My big brother started a while ago in other forums and people liked it. So this is going to be the spin off. You guys tell me how I do and go easy on me I'm only 13. Well, here goes.


The Beginning


It was a Monday morning, the first day of school. Sho was at the dojo with his grandfather like every other day. Sho was showing some kids a new style. His grandfather was just looking on. Once Sho was finish with the kids he sate down next to his grandfather.

Sho: So grand popa what do you think about how I been teaching these kids?

Grandfather: Sho you have a good talent for this. You showed them very well I don't know if even I could do better.

Sho then just smiled.

Grandfather: Sho I have to say that the school is doing well.

Sho: Yea it is. At this rate we well be able to extane the school so we can get more space for all of these students who comes in here.

Grandfather: Yea that well be good. But these kids come here for all the wrong reason. They come to learn how to beat up others so they can do well in that Crystal battling. They don't come here to learn control of ones self.

Sho: Maybe so but should we care if we are getting people her?

Grandfather: Sho how can you say that? You of all people should know that this it not some style you teach to some school punk.

Sho: (He then looks to the left) Well your right grand popa but my bus is here so I have to leave I'll see you once school is over.

Sho then grabed his stuff and left out the dojo quickly. As he was getting on the bus he looked back at the dojo and saw some bully looking kids trying to learn. But his grandfather turns them down. He then turned his head and went on the bus. As he was going to the back of the bus he saw someone out of the conner of his eye just starring at him. He couldn't make out the face cause it was being covered by the persons hood. As he was about to pass the guy. He saw a fist come towards his chest he then raised up his left leg to block then with the other leg he bong it across the guys face but the dude blocked with his left for arm. Sho was about to punch the guy but he stopped cause the guy started to laugh.

Sho: Why did you try to attack me?

The person said nothing just jumped up in Sho's face he bong up his hand like he was going to hit him but he took off the hood. It was his friend Guy.

Guy: Man you should have saw your face. (he then breaks out in laughter) Man I thought you where going to mess up your pants.

Sho: I should have knew it was you. You always are playing games. ( Sho then sate down next to him) I thought you where in Japan?

Guy: I was but the people there won't all that good in Crystal fighting. They where all weak I didn't even get a chance to show me true skills. So I told my Mom I wanted to move back with my dad here in China. Caused I figured if I'm going to beat any weak people up it might as well be you.

Sho: Ha ha ha very funny. But any mans can you believe we are in high school now?

Guy: Man you don't know how happy I am cause I heard the guy at this school are very powerful. I even heard that there are some girls how has never been beat in crystal fighting. So I hope they well bring out the good in me.

As the bus was on it's way toward school Guy had got a changed feeling in his stomach. He did know what was going on Intel he look at his wrist and saw his crystal glowing bright. He then had a smile on his face. He got up and asked the bus driver to stop cause he had knew that someone was fighting near by. But the bus driver paid him no mine and kept on riding. So then Guy looked at the top of the but and saw the little. hatch you could take off.

Sho: Man what are you thinking about doing?

Guy: There's a battle going on and I'm going to be there to see it.

Sho then looked to the left for a good second and then turned back slowly.

Sho: I tell you is that the only thing you...... Guy where you at? (Sho then stud up and looked around but still didn't see Guy. He looked up and saw the the hatch was off.) Man I can't believe he just left.

Then paying no mind that people where looking at him he also jumped threw the little space. Once he was on top of the bus he saw Guy jumping from roof top to roof top. He then jumped off the bus and landed on the nearest house there. He started to flow Guy. Once he caught up with him Guy was just looking down and saw two guys fighting. He then jumped down off the roof of the house and as he was falling he called out for his armor

Guy: INFERNO TRANSFORMATION.

As he was falling his fire then came out of his eyes. Then his whole body was covered in fire. He landed between the two. Once the fire went out he was standing there with his armor on ready to fight. He looked at both of the guys and his eye's turned into fire.


So guys I have to go but I'll finish more went I get back on. Sorry that it is so short Tell me what you think so far.