Writing Illusion-a song i wrote.

[DaRicanRhyno]

This is more of a song than a poem, but songs are just poems that go wif a beat, so w/e. Let me know what u think.

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The flames from my thoughts seem to be burning my skin,
The voices in my head, controlling, taunting me from within.
I've seem to lost myself somewhere deep in my soul.
Manic depression becoming harder to control.

Random answers flashed like an illusion in the sky .
While the questions lay hidden in a prison deep inside.
Your constant lies, painted on my vision of truth.
The clouds part to reveal the problems plaguing my youth.

Chorus*
I've always had the answers,
it's the questions that I've sought.
The poison seeps down deeper,
In my mind and in my thoughts.*

Emptiness shrouds me, engulfing me in darkness.
I'm trapped in my mind, spinning and left breathless.
No escape for me now, as I run into the shadows.
The walls come closer, as my path just seems to narrow.

Your voice just seems to linger, an endless echo in my head.
The choices that I made just seem to backtrack all I said.
Frozen flame revealed, to the brake of a new dawn.
This place is not for me, it's time that I've moved on.

*Guitar Solo*

*Chorus, till end*

[vegeta rocker]

very good! I am very impressed, i look forward to more of your work.

[Imp]

Encore! Encore! Bravo! I like it! Here's one of my songs; it's called "Lullaby".

Lullaby and goodnight
Just go to sleep
Please just try if you might
Try counting sheep
Lots of stars in the sky to calm you down
There's the moon way up high
There's not a sound...

Sleep is a candle that never will shine
Now just relax, you're doing fine
Hush, little baby, the angels are here
Lullaby, lullaby, you'll hear...
(music changes)
Just imagine you are in a dream
Try to believe the wonders of night
We see the skies of crystal blue
Clouds of pink and white

Song is a wonder, song is a dream
Song is a whistle, a happy scene
Song is a melody, song is a drum
Song is a wish for everyone

*chorus*
Ring through the wondrous land
The dreamy melody
This is a magic world
So magical, you'll see
Ring through the heaven sky
This dreamy melody
This is a lullaby
So magical, you'll see
Dreamy melody

Go to sleep and I'll be satisfied
Honey, darling, please just close your eyes
Dream a dream that's happy and is true
It's all up to you

Sleep is a candle, sleep is a song
Sleep is a rhythm that will shine so long
Sleep is a healer, sleep is a dream
Sleep is a wish based on self-esteem
(repeat chorus)
We're in a dream
We're in a place where we want to be
That's how it seems
Yeah all we have to do is dream
(repeat chorus)(music change)
(repeat the first two verses)

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Cool, huh? ;)