Writing Poems for the Poetically Challenged

[Mr. Maul]

I am poetically challenged, and if there are anymore out there like me, then feel free to post away.

Here I go.

How does the wind blow,
The sun shine,
Thine garden grow?

Simple, I'm sure the answer is
But don't ask me, because I is
not knowing the answer
um, something that rhymes with answer.(where's a good rhyming book
when you need one?)

This poem has gone on long enough,
I guess I'm not made of rhyming stuff,
But the stuff I like, I'm sure to try,
A great big slice of cherry pie!

Cherry pie, in the sky,
I could lie, or just die,
for cherry pie, in the sky,
Why,Oh, Why,Oh, Why?

I wish I could rhyme like an ancient bard,
And not like some big retard,
Rhyming Bard, Big Retard,
Why,Oh, Why,Oh, Why?

I repeat again for emphasis,
And I hope to no offense,
This poem has gone on long enough,
I guess I'm not made of rhyming stuff,
A great big dollop of marshmallow fluff,
Fluff, stuff, buff, tough,
Why,Oh, Why,Oh, Why?

I like trees, oak and spruce,
But what I like more is chocolate mousse.
oak, spruce, chocolate mousse,
Why,Oh, Why,Oh, Why when I try to rhyme
dessert is all that comes to mind,
Why,Oh, Why,Oh, Why?



Well that's the best I got in me, kinda wierd, ain't it?

[zidane11]

Actually, I think it's pretty good.
I guess that I'm poetry challenged. I know that I'm no good at them. Maybe if you practise a lot and don't try so hard you'll do better. It's worth a try.

[jupitersun]

o.O;;; oh my, that was rather different, i know im not poetically challenged but i dont like rhyeming and you seem to have that part down, it is pretty good.

[Boo]

hehehe! Thats coool!
But the stuff I like, I'm sure to try,
A great big slice of cherry pie!
lol

[Mr. Maul]

Yeah. I was hungry at the time.
Does anyone one want to give it
a try?

[Boo]

sure. Its not good, but..... I just made it up XP

Darkness grabs me
I cannot run.
It takes over me,
but I couldnt run.

It reaches my heart,
I couldnt run.
It wrapped around me,
and still I couldnt run.

This memory rain,
Flashing through my eyes.
and again I feeled the pain,
the pain of all of my lies.

I could not run,
I became tired.
the darkness overtakes me,
but the memories were long wired.

I saw my family,
I saw you,
but you didn't see me.
Death strikes me like it striked you too.

There it is, the endless light.
And there you are, shining bright.
I ran at you, you ran at me,
but when I closed in I waked up and noticed that it was all a fantasy.

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Bad huh? :(

[Mr. Maul]

It's not bad at all.