Yukazi Posted October 8, 2002 Share Posted October 8, 2002 Now that ive become happy once more I often look back, to see what used to be me The torment that I often faced, Has seemed to go and been misplaced. Everyone is happy about my turn around, but I cant help but think back to the days... The days when suicide was always on my mind, whether to live on, or end it with a quick slice. I remember trying, so hard to end it all, but something held me back. I now think I may have a purpose, or at least I hope. My days of darkness seem to be gone, by my longing for peace will forever be there. I know I must go on with my life and brush off the near death But I cant help but wonder, would it have been better... -------------------- This was a poem I wrote several weeks back. I entered it into a contest, and now have moved on to the Semi-Finals. I dont know if I still have fully realized what I have written. But please wish me luck everyone, and tell me what you think of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imp Posted October 8, 2002 Share Posted October 8, 2002 I like it. I say you should make it all the way to the finals with that wonderful poem. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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