Writing new stuff

[vegeta rocker]

Well here are some recent ones, tell me what you think and as always be honest. I'm looking forward to your opinion, DarkOrderKnight.



ILLUSION
to dream as a child
to conquer galaxies
lying at the edge of the sand box

to soar high above brushing through the clouds
while piloting a swing with expert precision
to hold the beauty of the crayola green earth
in your hand

behold

to topple from the sand boxes false edge
tangle up than fall from the clouds
and bleed onto the green grass
now growing blood stained
petals

Forgiveness
am i to regret
what i do not
summon
from myself

would the fallen
holders of wings see fit
to discriminate all
that they
could never be

may i bow my head
set forth my tears as my shield
and
spread my wings

Revelation on a mediocre day

the bittersweet taste of victory
is mute on my tongue
such a day as this
white hot lyrics scream
through my imaginings
gnash my teeth
at onlookers at home in this pitiful filth
of what i can only fathom as
my hell
and yet there is an infantile
peace taking form within me
perhaps the security of danmnation
far surpasses the insecurity of existence

[ke thampi]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by vegeta rocker [/i]
[B]Well here are some recent ones, tell me what you think and as always be honest. I'm looking forward to your opinion, DarkOrderKnight.



ILLUSION
to dream as a child
to conquer galaxies
lying at the edge of the sand box

to soar high above brushing through the clouds
while piloting a swing with expert precision
to hold the beauty of the crayola green earth
in your hand

behold

Very nice to read such a poem with a vision of our future
i want more from u
email me
[email]kethampi@hotmail.com[/email]



to topple from the sand boxes false edge
tangle up than fall from the clouds
and bleed onto the green grass
now growing blood stained
petals

Forgiveness
am i to regret
what i do not
summon
from myself

would the fallen
holders of wings see fit
to discriminate all
that they
could never be

may i bow my head
set forth my tears as my shield
and
spread my wings

Revelation on a mediocre day

the bittersweet taste of victory
is mute on my tongue
such a day as this
white hot lyrics scream
through my imaginings
gnash my teeth
at onlookers at home in this pitiful filth
of what i can only fathom as
my hell
and yet there is an infantile
peace taking form within me
perhaps the security of danmnation
far surpasses the insecurity of existence [/B][/QUOTE]